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Wow its so confusin but gud

Hey..I liked this fic...Yugi and Dartz...I never thought of that pairing before...

Ok, I admit it! I liked it. Especially considering I know just about zilch about Yugioh. It was a nice concept. I couldn't help but rock back and forth in pending insanity because of the grammatical and spelling errors (though they were small). Now, before you post anything else from now on, get your good 'ole friend Gideon and have her beta your fics! And then I won't ever have to worry about my insanity (at least, not because of fanfics.)

its really gud
poor yami, mayb he is lonely
he needs some1 2, seto?
update soon!

That was unexpected! I like how you kept the identity secret until the end, with no hints whatsoever. I love being surprised.

After the stunt I saw Yami pull in the story The Breaking I want to murder the bastard *goes off and does just that but brings back and keeps killing him 400,000 times so keep up the great work ice and update soon gtg now JA NE

Yup and now I'm going to create my own cliffhanger if you will *ties a rope around Yami that he alone cannot break and dangles him from a cliff edge* just say the word and he's a human pancake ok anyways keep up the great work Ice gtg now JA NE

Huh why does Yami insist on being such an idiot well now hes just being mean well Dartz Marik Bakura and Kaiba will see to it he pays thats for sure four guys each who has there own power in each of there own ways and who have a certain fondness for yugi I mean really who wouldnt sheesh anyways as joey would say "BAD MOVE CHIEF"seriously your dead Yami once they get there hands on you for taking Yugi against his will he told you already HE DOE NOT LOVE YOU get through your freakin head.*sigh* Anyways fyi for ya Icekit the skirts that guys wear in Egypt is called a kilt ya just like the scottish one same name for it

WHOA! DartzxYugi. Don't see those everyday. I like this pairing. Let's see what Dartz will do to Yami now...

O_O wow didnt see that comming I thought it would the usual forbidden you know bakura or Marik but never would I have guessed it to be Dartz well thats as forbidden as you can get it I'm sure hehe well keep up the great work gtg now JA NE