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for For Foolish Pride

by EmeraldRains

person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO WHAT WHERE HOW????
person ladywolfTerri
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Clues starting to come together but now I want to know what Yami has figured out!!! Please update soon!!!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right..first off..what's up with the whole "ass crap" thing This story's great! jusyt keep going with it!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting, I'm enjoying how you are writing this, leaving more questions than answers. can't wait for the next update.
person j.s.
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its starting of fine
its kl how ryou is trying 2 corrupt 'innocent' yugi
update soon