rate_review Reviews

I like it

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! ^__^
That last chapter really rocked!!!
I almost started crying during it... it was so Pefect. ^^
Beautifully Bittersweet in other words.
Anyways keep up the great storys... *bows to authoress*
Shadow Raven

P.S. I actally like the OOC Bakura, its the sweeter side of
him which NEVER shows.
But, I still lke the ususal Bakura, he sorta' reminds me of myself...
Till' Next Time

How Could Ryou do that!!!!
I just can't believe it...
My heart totally goes out for Bakura...
I can't belive he did that to his own soulmate, that was just Mean.
Anyway, I loved the Story! *bows to authoress*
And ummmmm... Do you think you can make a quick epilouge, Pretty Please... ^_^
Just like a quick funeral or somethin' and make Ryou feel Really Bad for his stupidty.
Thanks
Shadow Raven ^^

...
My god.
>__<
Way to make a very macho character cry like a wuss.

Use a spell check, synonyms aren't cool.
And don't ever try to use Iris again in a fic, unless you can write it well.

If you're going to write them out of character, at least write them WELL.