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for Lost Bet

by ladywolfTerri

person Gnattie
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
person Kayo
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I love the smut and the resistance. o^O^o The lemon scene was so awesome i could sing the praises for days!!! Write more, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase
person saphii
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally hot xD
person LadyGrey
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one hon... you should continue it, along with all your other stories, seriously!! Ja ne! ~LG
person Luna
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was yummy! *grin* I've always thought of Bakura being uke but you hit a nail right hard with a hammer when you wrote this...
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES I enjoyed it. DAMNIT! Now I'm torn between urging you to get more of One Dance or Alone typed up and asking you to write more one shots in the 'verse. Poor Marik though, at least at first. It's relly unusual to see him that emotionally vulnerable.
person TrunkZy(not logged in)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looooved it! The plot was magnificent (what plot? Yeeees!) goodness you just can’t help loving Marik and Bakura when they get down like that. VERY well-written! Loved it, love you and keep writing things like this and I shall worship you.
person Anei
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, you don't often see Marik as the Uke in a relationship. It's nice, almost sweet... for Bakura, that is.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent one-shot. The pacing, characterization and writing are all high-quality... and it was very hot! Great job!
person hato chiisai
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O I usually don't see Marik as an uke, but.... that was fan-fuckin-tastic. Bravo! ^____________^