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Where is Marik going? Poor Ryou getting attacked by evil hounds! Well done xxxx

Well worth the wait. Where the hell is Marik going? I mean he's down town that's like really far from Ryou and Malik. But at least Malik's okay now and poor Ryou, mean old dogs. Anyway i enjoyed the chapter. Update really soon, even though it's worth the wait.

WOW! that is a lot of fucking dogs. I guess the bright side to that is that Ryou technicaly isn't lying. And poor Malik, the cathider is just the icing on the cake, now isn't it? I also hope that they find Marik before he gets himself into a shit load of trouble.


Anyway, I'm still loving the story, and i can't wait until the next chapter ^_^

OMG!!!! Its good to read your fics again. Please tell me thats not all? Cause if thats it i'm gonna cry...... *starts sniffling*....... I like your fics when I have more time I'll have to read the two newer ones. ITs great that the website is finally back up. Will read and review more!!!!!

GFDhjher and other worthless key presses of exhaustion and anger! You only update with one chapter, after so many wait more than a week for these stories?! What's wrong with you?! D:< And then, there's no Pegasus or Malik in it. FWrggrht some more. I want to claw your eyes out with my weak, tattered little nails. Reviews, my foot. Be selfless and think of the poor little people, whose brains are melting and imploding with the long waits for a completed story to be finished!

Ahem. I love your story. It makes me happy. :D

Oh, my... so much going on in this chapter. It's nice to see Ryou Bunny happy for a change - for the most part - again... hint, Hint, HINT! ; ) The interaction between Ryou and Marik is very sweet and deliciously hot at times. My review here is going to be random thoughts as I remember what I found of note so forgive my ramblings all over the place... That Bakura was smothering Ryou with affection (especially after the revelation of the "little" altercation of sorts concerning how Ryou treated Malik recently) was very unexpected and cute. What was even MORE shocking was that I highly doubt that Bakura was "kidding" when he suggested a threesome with Marik and Ryou AND most importantly that Ryou was OK with that! Well, hell! He's a fucking bunny after all! (I had visions of that VISA commerical where the man customer at the pet store is trying to buy a bunny with some other form of credit and the bunny keeps multipling as time ticks by and question upon question is posed to him when VISA would have been much quicker!) I laughed hard at that! The mud slinging - literally - was hilarious! Ryou is a naughty bunny who already has his lion lover wrapped. I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY enjoyed the chase before the wild passionate animal sex. That was... just... well... for lack of a more original description... fucking HOT! OH, yeah... I was really liking that! But, damn it Ryou bunny! Shut the hell up about going back to Pegasus while your lion mate is pounding into you! I'm surprised that Marik didn't go limp for God's sake! I knew Marik was going to bite him because, as you said, lions do that while mating... as do tigers... ... ... yeah... viciously... eh hem. So, the shit that already hit the fan is now being flung around and is splattering the room - sort of like that mudslinging event earlier. I hope that Pegasus doesn't find out about Ryou's little rendezvous with Marik but I find that doubtful and wishful thinking. Nice chapter although thinking about what is to occur next - and which is inevitable - doesn't promote warm and fuzzy feelings...

And DAMN! Who is that Anon reviewer above me? I LOVE that person and their witty articulations and observations! I loved the comments on Pegasus in particular... PERFECTLY DESCRIBED better than I have ever heard that particular creepy character described before... although all boiled down to it... Pegalious (ACK!) is plain and simple a sick fuck. A very rich, spoiled one at that. And Ryou bunny! "from hell"... I laughed too hard for my own good! Please forgive me... I just had to comment on a gloriously written set of comments... and were well worded and summed up your fic so beautifully...

Okay, I've been whoring on this story since the fourth chapter, it's high time I participate in the extolation.
Your characterisation of Pegasus is just exquisite. You elaborate his canonical sex offender creepiness beautifully, coloring within the lines so to speak, extending his character into a sickeningly appealing, self-serving, self-indulgent sociopath, manipulating his wealth like no bourgeois mentality or morality would be capable of. Like a blonde Hannibal Lecter. Or something. He encapsulates the perdition of the rich, so engorged with luxuriant faculties he can actually buy falsities to shield himself from his own imagined inadequacies. His possessive fascination with Ryou, as superbly demonstrated at the end of the newest chapter (32 flavors of fucked up, by the way), effectively shicks the kit out of that sissy heterosexuality tryst those sillies at the studio set him on, and replaces his motivation towards flaming craziness very nicely indeed. Which a lot of fanfiction tends to just feck over. But not you! You have an adorable little commercialist despot, there.
And... Ryou is cute. Generic immasculated uke bunnyboy from hell. But *soooo* shodding cute. And Marik is cool, Yami's newfound avian idiocy is funny, so on, so forth, it's already been covered.
And, of course, you're the best for updating as regularly as you do, and the chapters are massive, too! Oooooooo I luff you. <3 We should be secret lovers. Don't say no, I'll have you abducted and genomically assimilated with a bunny rabbit. Hur hur.
PS, your fic is great and all, but seriously, the real show is the masses in the reviews shaking symbiotic fists at the anagonist and cheering for the Ryou bunny like a great fucking colloseum of bunny sympathizers.
PPS, for some reason I adore Rem. I imagine her like the Trigun Rem, but muscular and bereaved of tremendous Amazon boobies. Best obligatory functional OC ev4r.

this is soooo good, keep going!

OH, GOD! THE RYOU BUNNY IS GOING TO BE HAPPY (and maybe get lucky...) FOR AT LEAST ONE NIGHT! You know... you two are EVIL! Because, obviously, the Ryou Bunny has to return to the fucking pig Pegasus and this little glimmer of happiness is going to be extinguished mighty quick... it's almost worse than if Ryou Bunny hadn't seen Marik Lion at all! But, hell, I'm not going to complain because I am looking forward to the next chapter (which you better freakin' post before you go on hiatus, by the way!) which hopefully will be full of bunny and lion smex... Well, hey, it's wishful thinking at least! Loved the chapter with all the emotions bouncing around like crazy. The surprise reunion was very sweet and heartbreaking all at once. I'm glad that Ryou Bunny wasn't THAT broken that he was able to be comforted and still feel the love from Marik. And the end scene with Malik and Pegasus... you go, Malik! Spunky little shit! I hope that he keeps his spirit. I loved that he pretty much told Pegasus that he (Malik) is on to the sick bastard (Pegasus). Very nicely done!