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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person menacingk
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as always. I can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I drew Rem fanart.
...that makes me a superfluity of protein. ^,^
person K.E.Y.
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I realizs that people are lazy with reviewing, but omg your story is too awsome to only update like once a week. I can't stand going that long without knowing what is going to happen next, and i'm probably not the only one.

Pegasus is evil and needs to be disposed of. I can't believe he punished Ryou that badly and then turned around and said it was ok for him to talk about Marik. But when Pegasus gave Malik and Ryou those plushies first thing that went through my mind is that he may try to kill Bakura and Marik, whitch of course i hope he doesn't. And i almost cried whan Marik was walking theough the city and curled up on the curve waiting to die V.V

Please update soon
person lokivsanubis
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as all ways. I can't wait for little snow bunnies and warm fire places. Until next time.
person miku
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic always cheers me up xxx Hope Marik gets the job xx
person sglily
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my... there is so much going on in this lovely chapter... Damn it! I knew Pegasus was going to get involved somehow! At least (so far) he doesn't know about Ryou's second encounter with Marik. But, that he flies into a jealous rage and wants to beat the shit out of his bunny for even mentioning Marik's name starts to make me wonder if his "Toon" signature cards were really "Loon" cards... Fuck! And now that Pegasus willingly gives each of his "pets" a stuffed representation of their friends and is now all lovey-dovey and willing to take them on a trip? Get the fucking fluff out from between your ears bunny-rabbit! Pegasus definitely has something up his sleeve... and whatever is in his hat, ain't no rabbit... I LOVE Kaiba's outbursts! Oh, God! They are too funny! Marik's bit with Rem was needed, I see, to reenforce Marik's need to provide for Ryou WHEN Ryou is his to have and to hold. Man, that was brutal when Rem was explaining that Ryou was genetically modified to love and be loyal to his first partner... Marik managed to turn that around and be positive. Good chapter all around! Still loving it!
person menacingk
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hands down my favorite YGO fanfic ever! The hybrids are soooo adorable. Pllleeeeaaaassssseeeee post more soon!
person ShadowSlayer (Too lazy to log in)
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've EVERY read ANYTHING this AMAZING in my entire life... and I'm only on chapter 18... =^-^= but anyway... I just wanted to note that Dr. Inogawa, I believe, saw Ryou before the chapter with the Microchiping. Unless that was for one of the other Hybrids... hmm... I don't think so though. But anyway, you said that it was his first time seeing Ryou. Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! I've been reading it almost non-stop for the past two days... I'm a slow reader sometimes... =P
person Anira_Oceanfang
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Oh please keep writing... If you quit writing I'll die of boredom mostly.. I love your stories and they are soooo funny.
person sglily
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, that answered my question as to Ryou's behavior in the previous chapter. Although it was a sad way to have to do it - by just leaving without saying good-bye, that was for the best and a wonderful way of getting around the truth and fooling Pegasus. Good boy, Ryou! That's using the ole' noodle! I'm glad that Malik is getting along with Ryou now and vice versa. I liked how Malik sniffed Marik's scent on Ryou and the rather tactless comment thereafter! That Marik would be heartbroken because Ryou left so abruptly was only to be expected. That he would take off with no purpose in mind... what is that boy thinking??? ; ) I love Seto's behavior and his comments in this fiction! Too funny. Is Pegasus getting soft and feeble lately or is it just me? He must be under a certain bunny boy's spell... I thought for sure Ryou would get the beating of a lifetime regardless of his excuses... Hey, I'm not complaining! I'm glad the Ryou bunny is not being hurt! Good chapter! Look forward to more...