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Now now, Ryou, don't you forget Marik....darn.

O_O DAMN YOU. YOU GOT ME INTO PEGSY/RYOU. -collapse-

(Bad Malik!)

wow, it was almost like a switch in character here for Ryou...what happened to the timid little bunny who wanted humanity but was afraid to ask? Anywyas, good chapter, hope for more Marik/Ryou or Pegsy/Ryou goodness soon. -hands you a Ryouplushie-

You know, I like the Seto and Yami plot a lot! I hope to read more!

Aww, the Yamster is angsting. Poor thing. Good work on 33. :D

Perhaps one of the biggest revelations of this particular chapter is the fact that the authorities are now going to be forced to look into the possibility that hybrids had been once human. I found it amusing that Bakura was arrested for pissing in public... he's really having difficulties readjusting to more civilized conduct, isn't he? Silly skunk! Just the thought of him walking up to a potted plant and whipping out "little" Bakura - but not in front of children, mind you! - is just outrageously funny... This story takes place in New Orleans during Mardi Gras, doesn't it??? ; ) (Yeah, where public urination doesn't seem to be against the norm... GAH!)

I really think that Yami is hiding behind Bakura and Marik. He's being dumb. I really loved this chapter and I can't wait to see how Otogi is taking his transformation.

Aww, bless this was such a sweet yet heartbreaking chapter. I find myself agreeing with Bakura in this chapter pretty much all of the way through. I mean normally he has me groaning at how dense/stupid he's being at something but this chapter he showed what was under tha bravardo and I really liked that.

Oooh, and now the police have almost definate proof that hybrids are humans *cheers* we're getting somewhere to resolving the whole situation...that is so cool!

Yya! The word association game! Poor akura almost getting arreasted twice, at least he has a good head on his shoulders. xx Exelent chapter!

Ryou's a whore... there i said it and i can't wait for more. Go Bakura and Marik trying to make a living good for them and Malik needs to deal with his problem with porn. he's like that guy from 40 Year old Virgin. OMG he total is i could total see Malik making a BEST COME SHOTS 2006 DVD to watch with Bakura. GOD my eyes!!! Update soon.

what the HELL is wrong with ryou!!! he's usually not this horny, and why haven't you had marik get ryou back and make sure that they will never see pegasus again?!?! ohhh, i hate that guy! update soon, and ryou better get back to marik soon or i... well... i can't really do anything, but i sure as hell will be mad!

I love this story...but again I cannot help like the bad guy. I mean okay Peggy was very very mean to Ryou in the start but he's being so cute with him now I...argh I have got to stop this.

This chapter was hysterical, though the ice cube incident made me blink and blush slightly. Very, veyr kinky. Hehe. However I did love Ryou getting all sexual and teasing Peggy and Malik. I could just imagine it whilst he managed to stay looking entirely innocent.

Hehe, Maliks has crabs. *Rolls on floor* Loved that moment so frickin much.

You really had me worried for a moment about Yami and Seto, I mean Prideshipping or what. But I've seen from your deviantart account how the pair of them get to be on a slightly more level footing so when I remembered that I chilled a bit but still *wipes brow* close one!