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Now there was a scary chapter! So many emotions running through it. Malik hopeful at the beginning of the chapter and then turned suicidal by the end. Talking to Marik didn't seem to trigger anything resembling mate-like behavior in Ryou. If anything, the Ryou bunny was steadfast in denying the lion and making Marik understand that he (Marik) needed to move on. And, shit, did Marik fall apart! What a train wreck that was! In the meantime, Ryou happy as the whore bunny he is frolicks in the mud with his whoremaster seemingly already over his "heartbreak". Wow. We all know there is more to it than that but in a nutshell... my head is spinning at the possibilities! You have a lot of loose ends to tie up in three (count'em three!) chapters, love!

T-T No! Why must Marik go back to the shop!? >< That chapter was so angsty...I loved it. Update soon!

Another chapter filled much information and a Skwooey Wabbit... We better up the meds for the Whore Bunny... sigh. OK. The Whore Bunny was rather open about his sexual relationship with his Whore Master in front of not only Malik but another Master and another hybrid... hmm... I'm surprised that the Whore Bunny didn't get his ass slapped. Pegasus seems to have had his medications upped as well perhaps to control that evil temper? Hm... So the Whore Bunny is not only reacting to his new found "love" for his Whore Master but also he's in heat because of the heat? Hm... Pegasus shows us once more his uncaring attitude to his mate with the whole swimming and especially the water slide episode - forcing Ryou to do something he doesn't want to do. The Ryou Bunny is in trouble now isn't he? He is getting brainwashed into not wanting Marik as a mate and now his "chosen" mate is rejecting him by not behaving appropriately? Hm... This vacation from Hell better end soon!

Rock on chapters 33/34-ish to 36! :D I am enjoying this muchly <3

I LOVE IT!! It's a great story! I really want Marik and Ryou and Bakura and Malik to get back together!! Plz tell me they will! PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!PLZ!

Well... Wow. There's so much going on in this chapter. I might have had to have waited a few chapters for the much anticipated Ryou parts but you buried me is sugar... sugah! Let's see... The Whore Bunny... I mean... Ryou Bunny was pretty tuckered out from his "frolicking" the previous night, eh? I got more of a kick out of the sunscreen section than was probably warranted but it was pretty cute and funny all at the same. Ryou's reaction to the Three Bimbo Bunnies was HYSTERICAL! Oh, Lord! Laugh! I'm surprised that one of them didn't just grab poor Ryou's bunnyhood and DEMAND that it stiffen and then impale themselves! And what the hell??? Ryou was considering having sex with them just to have babies??? Once more we revisit the term Whore Bunny... Well... maybe Stud Bunny. Then the lions... that was surprising. I liked that Ryou was so jovial and unafraid at first while in TWO (count 'em... two) lion's presences. I was really scared there that Ryou was going to be raped but Malik protected his friend. I really didn't "dig" the conversations betweeen the bitch owner of the lions and Pegasus. In fact, I rather thought that Pegasus would have gone ape shit over the fact that his "precious baby angel bunny" had been attacked. The idea that his bunny had been the one to provoke the attack was preposterous. The lionesses sort of softened the blow. Ryou's little freakout there I guess is just the tip of the iceberg, isn't it? ISN'T IT??? ; ) He even scared the bejesus out of Pegasus. Then we're back to Whore Bunny mode... sigh. Ryou Bunny... honey... you need some meds. ; ) Nah, he needs his lion who is NOT a disgrace. A very fun-filled chapter...

you know what? i just thought of something. that is agenst the law, what pagasus is dooing with ryou. pegasus is like, in his thirties and ryou is only seventeen. i don't like the pairing either. i always skip that stuff. please please PLEASE get ryou out of pegasus' grasp for good soon and get him back with marik. p.s. i read that yugioh pirate story and i loved it! that was so funny how you made the yuyu hakusho poeple animals. kuwabara is the splitting image of the real one in more ways than one.(he is so stupid!^^ anyways, update soon, and pretty please get ryou awat from pegasus. oooh, i know. make pegasus punish ryou for something and get the police to come and take ryou away for animal abuse and have seto find out and pick ryou up. just an idea for you to ponder over.^^

Well, the hardest thing to read was when Marik and Bakura were doing all of their work in order to provide for their (possibly less than deserving at the moment) mates. All of their hopes riding on the fact that their mates were thinking of them and wanting to be with them. Working hard to provide a home, necessities, and where great thought was put into an item or set of items that would be special to the (un)deserving (at the moment little horny bastards) mate. Yeah, all this providing a nest bit while the two whores live and screw it up (both figuratively and literally) while "on vacation". Well, I suppose there is a reason and we'll learn it soon enough, eh? ; ) I still like the almost raving lunatic side of Kaiba with his usually foul-mouthed rantings - and Yami's devilish comebacks; however, and no offense to either of you two lovely writers, I am just not a fan of Y/S so my review won't delve there. Two chapters without the sexcapade antics of the other two whore creatures has been like hell. Give it up, Hato! Throw me some sugar, babe! ; ) Otherwise I will go rabid...

Fish are frinds, not food!

Lol, nice chapter! I'd love to see baby Ryou's, but I imagine that won't happen... waiting for the next update :)

Awww that wa so cute. I love Yami and Seto...especially now they are figuring certain things out. *Giggles* Master...we always knew there was some sort of deep seated reason for Yami's buckle and belt fetish. Come on Seto use this, I know all of those crazy fangirls will enjoy it...me included!!!

*Raises eyebrow* Do you know thats really odd. Before reading this chapter I actually started drawing of Ahmose...but I can't draw to save my life so it'll probably never see the light of day again *Laugh* But I really do love the guy.

Anyway I can't wait for the next update