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by hatochiisai

person Galacia and dark pearl
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't believe this! It is absolutely FREAKIN FANTASTIC PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!!!!

galacia: please stop yelling at the nice people, Dark pearl they can tell you like it.

Darkpearl sorry but DAMN it's all so good! I bet Seto has to sign the lease and all that because hybrids are considered property and all that.

galacia: Probably but he would do it. Let's see Duke, (sorry can't spell the japanese one for the life of me)
Mako, hey is mai one I don't remember seeing her name but weevil is and Rex are, and of course the other four who are connected.

Dark pearl: Okay how pissed do you think Malik's sister is going to be when she finds out her brother is a hybrid? Anyone? she's probably going to sue peguasus for custody of him. or something.

galacia: Maybe. but again the whole not human thing which is how pegusus is getting away with screwing Ryou
he's only 17 the pervert. I mean sheesh wait till he's consenting and legal or something but that is just wrong.

Dark Pearl: Because he wasn't legal?

Galacia: that could be forgiven if he didn't use the chemical coctail to get ryou. it's as bad as giving someone a date rape drug as far as I can see except if you screw em not only do they rememeber it they think they love you and want you to keep doing it.

dark pearl true okay brighter topics?

Galacia: I guess I love the whole thing with poor kaiba having all these hybrid's plus a teen living with him and trying to deal with it all. I also think the club was a great idea.

Dark pearl me to definately want to see more so is that it?

Galacia: other than the whole I am glad Rem is being seen in a whole new light she was kinda of so so in the begining but she obviously seems to care about the creatures that are in her care. She isn't mean really if she could change them she would but she's left with finding them homes so she does. I don't know it's obvious
she would do anything for Bakura and Marik. if they asked so the hybrid's happiness does seem important to her.

Well that's it for now more please!
person soulless
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, very good chapters and all. i love it so far. but i have to ask you something. i know that ryou and marik will be together in the end and that pegasus will leave ryou alone. i can feel it. but i'm just wongering...please tell me there done with the suicide attempts! i was just told today that my best friend took a lot of pills and tried to kill herself. i want to keep reading this story, i love it, but i can't if there is going to be more of that. so please tell me, like at the beginning or end of the next chapter you update if there will be more then this or not. thank you. P.S. i hope marik get's better soon, and malik and ryou. they deserve it.
person carol
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't try to e=mail me its busted, but i was wondering. pegasus had a loyal chip put in malik right? so how is it affected? does he have to do the same thing to malik he does to ryou? or is it different?
person sglily
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the fun continues... Whose brain dead idea was it to mix prey with predators with only a few "handlers" in attendance during the seminar? It was rather amusing. It was almost like a buffet line for the side with canines wasn't it? ; ) Glad to see Malik and Ryou friendly again for the most part. Those two go at each other's throats like a couple of wild animals at times... ; ) Rem has really come through as the mother figure in this story, hasn't she? Tough love! She "smacked" Marik back into shape. The phone call between Marik and Ryou seemed to do the trick. I wonder how Marik plans to get Ryou (and Malik) away from Pegasus especially if you "only" have 2 more chapters to go! Well, at least Marik and Bakura have their little Love Shack ready to go for their more submissive mates... The story only gets better!
person miku
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, I can't wait to see how this ends. I loved Yami's attitude to Seto in the last few paragraphs, it had me in stitches. xx
person Velvetina
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....**Stares** bwahahahahahaha...oh my lord. I cannot stop laughing, really that ending was just too funny. More than made up for the earlier bucketfulls of angst. Just...hahahaha. Okay I'm about done. But I do have to agree with Yami, us English make awesome beds. Now to get the weather sorted out and we're an all round fabulous country.

Malik and Ryou made up!! Under rather dire circumstances but it all came out the way I wanted so its okay. Though Pegasus is going to freak because I have a feeling its going to go downhill for him soo. How are ya gonna do that anyway, hmm I guess I'll find out soon.

Excellant chappie as ever!
person jess
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter!!! i wuv dis story tons!!! update soon and make sure it ends with a happy ending
person K.C
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I HATE PEGASES!!!!!!I can't believe he could be such a bastard!!! Ryou can't forget Marik!!! I want to kill that stupid white haired freak *the evil one not Ryou* !!!!!!!!! Add more soon I love you girl!!!
person RabidSqurl
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good on chapter 37. ^^ You rock my world. :)
person Velvetina
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
200th reviewer! Yay me! He.

Oh my. What an angst filled chapter **Sniff** How sad, so my potential deaths but so far everyone is alive. Just about. Argh, as much as I don't want to I cannot help but like Pegasus in this fic, the more of it I read the more I like him. I'm a deranged person I know.

Only three more chapters to go? Woah, thats kinda cool but what is going to happen in those three chapters? So much could happen and I don't know what. More soon, please! Lol, I know I've gotta wait a week. **sigh** I'll keep the images of a muddy Ryou bunny in my head to keep me happy for now.