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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person Snigdha
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, "The Jungle" is on of the best fanfiction I have read recently. I just love Ryou-centered fix. Yours is toltally amazing and totally refreshingly original. Sorry if I sound redundant, but I just love your story. Please, please continue your story.
Thanks
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!! This new fic is just awesome. Ryou makes a cute bunny. Bakura's a skunk! BWAHAHAHHA!!!! Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Roar!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon! I <3 your stories! I read everyone one you wrote! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
person Camille
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I love this! Poor Ryo!
person Sharpie
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! I KNEW IT! I was right about the lion!

Ha! Wonderful.
person Hiira
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!!
That's all I can say so far! Just brilliant!! I loved the it! Please continue on! I just can't wait until next chapter!!
Ryou is my favorite character and to imagine him in the appearace of a rabbit, .. hmmm I really need to work on my creativity skill to picture him clearly, anyway love it so much. keep up the good work !!

person Drago
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo funny! I could never picture Yami as a bird but it is funny. I can't wait to read more. The only way this could be funnier is if the cought Jono and made him a Dog! LOL Keep writing!
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's very different. Not bad, just different.
I have a question though, do they become full animals or just have animal characteristics? And can they still talk?
Anyway it was really good! I enjoyed reading it!
person Camille
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryo! Poor Yami! I hope someone saves them!
person Sharpie
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...'Twas such a beautiful picture set up in my mind. You're quite talented. I envy your skills, though 'animal people' seem to be common in fanfictions. I was highly disappointed when the chapter ended, and I had such an URGE to punch the screen.
Though I'm not usually a fan of Ryou, it was adorable. And it's always exciting to see Crawford. He's so rare to find, these days.
I felt sorry for Yami. Poor--thing. I'm so eager to see who this Lion is. I have an idea, but I suppose I'll have to wait. And, to answer any questions, I believe they only transform partically? I don't think anyone would want to kidnap an 'innocent' boy to change into a rabbit, when you could buy those things at a pet store. I could be wrong. I lurve your stories. All of them.

Aw. Pink eyes.