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WONDERFUL story! I'm terribly frightened now though.... T_T Wah, poor Ryou-sama! Those people are so MEAN!!!!! I wanna march in that shop and give them a talking to! So mean.... That can't be legal.... Um... I know this is probably horribly rude, but might it be possible if I used this plot and some of the details of the medical junk/transformation process for a manga/comic? I'll make sure I put "Based on Hatociisai's fanfic 'The Jungle'." Would that be alright with you? Or am I being too forward? *nervous* Ah, great story! ^_^ *gives cookies* Yay Hato-sama! Keep writing more please? Ja'ne!

I forgot if it was on fanfiction or adulf fan but now i relize it's on both most joyous any who~

I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last two and wonder why chouldn't bakura pick a more femine name i mean he's the one humping the damn thing not the other way around! and how would you punish a skunk?

that's all i love it continue i'll be waiting for the update this is the only fic i've read for the past week inexperenced writes fustrate me and especially when they for get about the space bar so frequently.

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Interesting concept. I've seen the hybrid thing done once before, but you've really turned on the tears and angst with this one. I like it for that, the raw emotion and all.

I'm confused though - they are part animal, part human on the OUTSIDE too, right? Or are they human minds in the bodies of animals? Sometimes it seems one way, sometimes the other.

Your story is really good! I do have a few questions though. How big are Ryou and all the other pets...are the human size? And are thier cages life sized? Also are the hybrid pets legal and normal in thier society?
Please update soon though!

Well... I don't know where to start! Intriguing story... Ryou as a cute fluffy white bunny complete with tail and perky ears! Awwww! Does he have whiskers? Can't you just see little scrunched up bunny nose and whiskers twitching with... irritation at this point for Ryou is confused, and rightfully pissed! I don't like to see Ryou tortured, and to think that he was kidnapped and turned into someone's pet is disturbing to say the least. And Pegasus... ew... having his evil hands and evil way with the cute little bunny. Did I say 'ew'? Oh yeah, I did but... EW! And Marik... I am curious... if Ryou can throw food over the enclosure and if he can heave a fuck toy over... can he throw himself to the lion(s)? I find it interesting that the woman handler/keeper told Marik that Ryou is already spoken for and will not be around much longer so to basically not get attached. Hmm... Bunny... liking the bunny. Liking the story! You go, Girls!

Alright, sat down and read the first three chapters!! Very good and highly disturbing!! I wonder if Ryou will figure out that "hands" is Peggy and how he will handle that?? Please update soon!!

Also wondering if Marik is going to try to get into Ryou's cage? I mean jumping or using his "tree" to gain the extra height?? Just curious..^^;

Yay! You updated! Cheers!!!!!!!!

Hn. I'm actually eager to see Malik and Yami. =\

I was also a bit humiliated when I read over the mouse bit. I'm not sure why. It just seemed awkward, which is probably what you meant for it to be. Both of you are doing great, with the adorable bunny outfit, and all. The collar made me laugh. I'm just a sadistic fuck, even if it wasn't that bad. Love.

I Love you stories! Update soon

Wahhhhhhh! Please update! I <3 Lion Marik and Ryou Bunny!!