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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person sglily
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... you weren't kidding when you told me there'd be some angst! Damn it! Poor Ryou! He needs some lovin'! (and NOT Pegasus! *wink*wink*) I loved how Rem said, "Gosh darn it!" What the hell? Make her swear like a sailor for fuck's sake! ; ) Marik... the poor guy... he's in love with the bunny. It's so cute how he protects Ryou bunny (well, without all the blood and bashing of heads against glass enclosures and all!). And, Ryou... all drugged up and senses all screwed up. He just wanted some reassurances! I loved how he dug his way over to Marik... and Marik licked his wounds... ahhhhh... And, now Ryou bunny is shacked up with Rex. Cruel. Mean. Nasty. That would be you, dear! JUST kidding. I so love this story. I also enjoy Burning Sea naturally because the hot little one and his mate are in it (R/B) so I look forward to an update when you can. A month away from the 'net? Ouch! But, we'll have loads of stuff to catch up on after you get back online, right? Hint hint hint... pen... paper... type like a madwoman... Thanks for a great story and a very Merry Christmas to you, dear!
person Anira_Oceanfang
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will try to update more but school and finals are killing some of us. I like burning sea and AI. All your fics are really great please continue! Thanks very much!
person Cheshire
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Keep going, your donig a great job!
person Hiira
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! this chapter was soooooo~~ funny!
I love how Yami acts! He is so adorable and hilarious.
and it is so nice to see ryou have someone who cares for him.
and you know what is so great? there are two chapters!
sorry for late review. I have final exam, and actually I am suppose to be reading this right now, rather I should be studying...
hmmm... oh well.. too late.
anyway loved it!
person Hiira
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
since you asked for two reviews and and you gave me two chapters, I think I should do that.
I feel so worried about ryou.
dun! dun! dun! it is ryou's doom's day!
although I was guessing about this coupling I now see it was true.
it is quite unique (but not weird!) to see a bunny and a lion as a couple.
Oh! how wonderous world is ahead of me to find out as more and more chapters will come up and show me how they will live together!
love ya, and love your fanfic!
I got to go and study now so if there is late review please understand. T_T

person sglily
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, it dawned on me that I reviewed your lovely story here pre-disaster at AFF so here's to another attempt! May it stick this time and stick good! ; ) Damn it! I have no idea what the hell I wrote previously but I am still captivated by this story. Anything in Ryou... I've gotta check it out! (You have to write another one with B/R, babe... gotta do it... they are just... right for each other. Did you ever think about a sequel to Tearing Down the Sky? LOVED that! Loved the two of them in that particular story as I did Wisdom Teeth and the Crave It... etc. stories... I've been secretly stalking you! ; ) ) ANYWAY... I love fluffy bunny Ryou. I like how he is slowly being attracted to Marik. I especially liked Marik protecting Ryou bunny when the monsters - I mean children - had their hands all over poor Ryou. Very nicely done. I am really frightened by what will happen since Ryou has been injected again for being a bad pet bunny... And a nice treat... two chapters at once! I saw your review of Rings and read you were to get snow... we are due for some in another day or so living in the NE section of the good ole' US. And thank you, dear... a very Merry Christmas to you as well if we don't get to chat again!
person Galacia
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay this is getting good. Now as far as I can guess everyone is still human size but dressed like animals. Which makes me wonder about what parents would take their children to this type of place. unless they aren't naked when they are being played with by children. Yami did a nice job playing match maker though. Marik does seem to be head over paws for Ryou and Bakura well is being Bakura. I do hope Yami heard correctly about Marik that would be nice for both of them to leave that store together but I am doubting that is going ot happen. Seto and yami huh is seto going ot be an animal or a human?

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Galacia
person Hiira
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, while I was not here you updated 2 chapters! Amazing! And Guess what is more amazing, your new chapters!! I loved it! I felt a lot of pity on ryou, and had to laugh and pity bakura at same time. And marik is so nice to ryou isn't he? Those parts were so adorable! Love everything! Although ryou is my favorite character I can't wait until I see yugi (or was it yami?) and pegasas again. hope you have a nice day.
person Tenshi
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! It's such a sad story, but deals with issues about humanity and what it means to be human. It's just such a great and sad story.
person Kiharu
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic! Ryou is so cute! And the fact you made Bakura a skunk; that had me hyperventilating, I was laughing so hard~! Marik does make a very good lion.... ^_^ Hope you update soon!