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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person RabidSqurl
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic ending to a fantastic story. :D Amazing work. ^^
person Kaire
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!! ^o^ You are an amazeing author please continue writing fan fics.TT_TT I was soo happy at the end of this fic.
person sglily
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God! The idea of Yami just taking off without a word and flying South for the winter is just too funny! Well, your story certainly didn't end as I thought it might. Pegasus had a change of heart (ironic choice of words if there ever were any) and came through for his bunny. You guys hinted at that at the end of the 2nd to last chapter but who whudda thunk it that Pegasus would give up (in a sense) his precious baby bunny? Not I! Not without a nasty fight anyway. How long will things stay happy for the reunited lovers? I shudder at the thought especially after reading the summary for the sequel... You two are Evil!
person honeycharm
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and all, but when is Ryou going to want to leave Pegasus. He loves him and he's always fucking him, but does he still want Marik or Pegasus?
person harvestsprite
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and all but isn't Ryou loving his master a little to much? How can he want to leave him if he loves him and wants to get fucked so badly by him?
person sglily
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pegasus' ugly nature reared its ugly head again, didn't it? It wasn't only directed at Malik but also at Ryou from time to time. But, to tell the truth, Ryou has been rather bipolar with his extreme end of the spectrum emotions... running both hot and cold towards his friend and companion, Malik. Well, Pegasus should be included in that description as well. Nice to end the vacation on such a crappy note - knowing that Malik is to be put up on the "For Sale" block. I found it disturbing that Ryou knew damn well what was happening in the back of the limo even beyond the beating that Malik was subjected to and yet still could defend Pegasus in his mind. Always the manipulating bastard, it was even more disturbing when Pegasus left all the little gifts for Ryou, knowing that the whore bunny would fall for the tokens of false love. Malik and Bakura's reunion was classic - taking over Marik's cave was pure fun. The confrontation with Pegasus was rather ugly. Afterward I was rather surprised that Ryou was able to forgive Pegasus for all the heartbreak and the wrongs done to his (Ryou's) person. Look forward to the next installment as always!
person yunasgrace
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Malik but at least now he can finally be with Bakura. Pegasus seems like he's finally noticing Ryou's feelings. mayb they could share, pegasus and marik can have ryou 3 days a week each and for the last day they both have him XD
i want another chappie... ill do anything but plz post another chappie. were comin near the end and your makin us wait plz plz plz poat another chappie ^^

good luck
yunasgrace
person Camille
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please say that Pegasus will give him up willingly? His father reported him missing and he knows how much crap he can get into over it. Sigh...
person jess
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another chapter. this is the bestest story ever and i hope pegasus realizes what he's doing is wrong and everyone can get along together eventually. update soon
person carol2flute
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh,no!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanted to see pegasus have malik put under the loyality enhancements!!!!!!!!!!! i was so excited then they stopped him!!!!!!!!! Why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!why,i say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bu ti love ur story! u have excellent writing skills. i love the story and i will keep reading it. and the sequel! but why did u cut that part!!!!!!! that was the best!!!!!!!