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D'oh, you are EVIL!!!

Please update soon. Please please please. I want to read more. I really do. You update so much when no one else will. Please update soon! I'll review! See? Proper reviews!

PROS:
- original plot
- loving pairings
- great mix of a yaoi lover's dream
- one of the few Marik/Ryou writers out there
- update so fast like wow!

CONstructive Critisism:
- slight mischaracteration of characters, but since this is AU, I think it's fine. ^--^ It's just strange to read about Ryou spazzing on someone or to have Rex actually bully Ryou down. Considering canon Ryou has a younger sister, I had always imagined he'd be easier at tackling younger children, but again, tis is AU, so it's fine! ^--^
- slight mischaracteration of Marik, but again, this is AU, so it's fine. ^--^ But perhaps for future stories wtih Marik/Ryou, maybe you could make Marik's care for Ryou a bit more gradual...and how often Marik shows weakness. eg: whimpering, and what not. ^-^

Shee? 5 Pros and 2 cons that are really just 1 con. ^--^ SO UPDATE SOON!! PLEASE? PLEASE? PLEASE?

D'oh, you are EVIL!!!

Please update soon. Please please please. I want to read more. I really do. You update so much when no one else will. Please update soon! I'll review! See? Proper reviews!

PROS:
- original plot
- loving pairings
- great mix of a yaoi lover's dream
- one of the few Marik/Ryou writers out there
- update so fast like wow!

CONstructive Critisism:
- slight mischaracteration of characters, but since this is AU, I think it's fine. ^--^ It's just strange to read about Ryou spazzing on someone or to have Rex actually bully Ryou down. Considering canon Ryou has a younger sister, I had always imagined he'd be easier at tackling younger children, but again, tis is AU, so it's fine! ^--^
- slight mischaracteration of Marik, but again, this is AU, so it's fine. ^--^ But perhaps for future stories wtih Marik/Ryou, maybe you could make Marik's care for Ryou a bit more gradual...and how often Marik shows weakness. eg: whimpering, and what not. ^-^

Shee? 5 Pros and 2 cons that are really just 1 con. ^--^ SO UPDATE SOON!! PLEASE? PLEASE? PLEASE?

...Why do I so desire for Pegasus-sama to 'mate' the little Baku-bunnie...? O_x;;; *is such a freaky...freak* XD
...Or just Pegasus obsessed. >_>; lol
Godly story! Keep up the good work! ^^

You.... Are... EVIL!!!!!!!....

Great job!!...and that is a horrible cliffie!!!! Hopefully you will update soon!!!

OH my god that is hilarious! bakura, my poor sexy kura no dignity left.... WEll some until she gets the bonnet and bib... heh! oh well ! oooo i think i know what marik did. I think he just took tuc and nod to keep them safe.... Oh i really enjoyed this chapter and i really hop and pray that the moth w/ out acess to the internet goes quickly i really enjoy your stories and cant wait for burning sea. I'll go and read AI next so don't give up on it!

Kreekun

I am really loving this fanfic! It's so good and I'm addicted. I just keep reading it! Can't stop @.@ I'm writing something similar to this, but Ryou's turning into an animal naturally. Ah well I love the fanfic and I was dancing around my room when I saw Chapter 6 up! Woot! Hope Chapter 7 comes son too. It's hard to write fanfics every week, so my fanfics take time too. Ah well see ya round deary.

Kidea

P.S. Love all your fafics where Tea/Anzu dies ^_ ^ Die Tea die!

holy freaking cow. this is so unique and different, and i cannot stop read it! please, please, you have to write more! i have to know what happens next!

I love this fic...absolutely ADORE THIS FIC! WANT TO RE-READ THIS FIC! ...*re reads it*....not! enough! *re reads it again* kinda happy now...write more! please! IM BEGGING YOU!

New chapters are as brilliant as always. Although, even though I literally bowed to the story in the beginning, I still have a few issues. I don't think many have a clear picture of what the creatures look like. You weren't too descriptive with that. Also, I'd like to know how large the enclosures are, how large the creatures are, and why Rem happens to have superhuman strength. I also wasn't sure why Diasuke injected Ryou once more, though he deserved it. I'm tiring of his 'innocence'. Was it solely for pain? Also, did Rem simply dye Bakura pink? Poor thing. I'm still amazed at the lengthy chapters. They make me happy to no end, especially since I like this fanfiction more than most of the others. I'm still eager to see Malik. I've waited for six chapters, and have not seen him appear. I know I'm a worthless, impatient reader, but I must see him. It's an obsession. He isn't written about very much, (Contrary to popular belief. There aren't many GOOD stories with him in them, that I can grow attached to.) and when he actually IS seen, he only gets a small appearance before he has to exit through the other side of the stage.

All in all, I adore it. You could have been more specific with the surroundings and appearances than deciding to blab about Ryou's personal life, but this belongs to BOTH of you. It's not my say. I love it, I love the characters, and the idea is priceless. You actually forced me to enjoy the hybrid pet shop theme. And I also love Peggy. So, extra points for you! Please continue soon. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens.

Rex made me giggle madly.

Poor Ryou!!!!

Isn't Rem going to talk to Ryou like Dai said?! why doesn't Ryou just give her his full name and Yami's full name, tell her to look in missing persons, that they are... or were human. I wonder how she would handle finding out something like that, all the lives she helped ruin, all the people that she took humanity away from.

Please update soon!!