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Hi there! Love the story, but just a question. Are the hybrids as tall as their former human sizes? Or are they as tall or a bit taller as the animals they represent? Just to get a good view in my mind! ^_^

My god - you have made my week with chapter 11. XD It's the first decent 'HawtPegaText!' I've read in like, four months. *_*; [ I suspose I should sit down, and force myself to write something snazzy to keep me content, but I just lack the tallent of making text godly like you, and most of the people here on AFF. ;_; ]
Lord, I swear that little, single sentence, where Pegasus 'touched himself,' generally made me fall over with mad, fangirlish nosebleeds. ._.;; lol. X3
Um...yea... >_>;
Because you have gotten a good 70+ reviews for this well-deserving fic, and most likely will never read this, Just incase of the sight off-chance that you do, I just want to say; "keep it up!" and "You are my savior~!! \^o^/" [ For I go into Pegasus-secks withdrawl if I don't get atleast a little dose of it every frew months. ._.; lol. ]

Two words... disturbingly sexy. Ugh. The whole good bunny... let's fuck bunny was just sexy and yet disturbing. Sexy, that Ryou was so horned out and wanted a mate so badly and was willing to give himself over to Pegasus... it definitely wasn't rape which is nice to see. Disturbing as Ryou began to have second thoughts and Pegasus is just so... ew. Bakura getting an erection looking through a PlayBoy was just hysterical! And then Marik... go in the bathroom and take care of that thing! Oh, Lord! Too funny! Good job and looking forward to so much more!

Wow... well written as usual but damn were those chapters fucked up!!!

Yami isn't as mad at Seto.... and Seto treating him like a person rather than an animal is really nice... as well aspromising to bring Yugi over. I wonder if Seto won't use some of his money and influence to shut down Dai... permanetly! and then help the people to recover as much of their humanity as possible...

Marik and Kura are doing better... I like how Malik is helping them without them realizing it... that is very nice! As well as the fact that they saved Malik like that and won over Ishizu.

okay... now the long part... odd how I don't normally leave long posts... but lots of questions this time...^^;;

Something that had me wondering... Marik or Malik doesn't have the Rod... Yugi and Yami don't have the puzzle... this is definately an AU story so why does Peggy have the eye??

another thing... now that Ryou has realized it was Peggy that ordered him is he going to put the rest of the pieces into place??... I would be very disappointed if he didn't... I mean not only the fact that Peggy was the one who ruined his life not only before, by having him kidnapped... but was also obviously the one that had Marik killed and had been playing some sick, twisted game with his mind ever since bringing him home...

Also... I seriously hope someone rescues him from Peggy soon!!... Seto has the power to back him in a corner and win....but Ryou seems to be losing his mind and personality more and more each day... how could he ever find his way back to himself if Peggy completely breaks him?!!

Alright... enough for now...Keep up the great work and please update soon!!

I'm loving this fic! I cannot wait for you to update it.
I love the song you put in Brothers under the sun. It's my favourite song from Spirit, I'm glad someone else knows it!!
So keep up the fantastic work! I especially love Bakura-skunk and Ryou-bunny. Are you going to do anything on their families? Like Yugi, or Ryou's father and how they're coping? Sorry this review is getting longer than I expected, so please update soon and you're doing a great job with it!!! :)

I'm so happy with the way you wrote that chaper.! for a while i was daydreamin of what you'd write and to be hobnest it wasn't what i expected- it was ten times better! Oh by the way, I really think that peggsy shoud try spanking ryou,. it might get him to cooperate a litle better. Well cont wait untill you wrie the next chaper. I'm looking forward to it.

DeathJunk-E

I can't belive Seto made Yami a bird! LOL!
Poor Ryou, Rex is soo mean!

Keep up the good work!

Drago
(aka Kovu on ff.net))

Another good chapter although I am not liking Ryou getting the crap beat out of him. I know, I know... it's for a reason but... And what the hell is with Marik? Why isn't he going frantic looking for his bunny??? I want to smack him upside his doofus lion skull! ; ) Making him go searching for his bunny... please? ; ) Don't you just love the demanding bitch reviewers? I love Malik's sister in this story... so angry! You go, girl! And Bakura calling her "hot"... I had to chuckle at that. Love the story and waiting patiently (sort of...) for more!

Poor Ryou . It had me crying and I’m not one to so easily . You portray Ryou’s emotions wonderfully in your stories . I’ve been a fan for a while and this is definitely one of my favs that you’ve done .

Damn! Poor Ryou!!! I'm surprised that Yami didn't throw the question at Seto of how Mokie would feel if that had been done to him instead of Yami...I wonder how long until Malik helps Marik and Kura rescue Ryou though?... Please update soon!!