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by hatochiisai

person Same as above.
schedule May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Homepage of Hato Chiisai be'z not able to being founded.
person sglily
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another action-packed chapter! Whew! I really like Malik's feistiness! Go, Malik! I am not happy about him being kidnapped and hence turned into a hybrid but I have to say that I am very curious as to what KIND of animal he will be. Another bunny? Then you would have "Flower" and "Humper"... I mean "Thumper"... yeah... gettin' it on! ; ) Well, as much as Yami isn't a fave of mine, I like how you gals have written him. He is grumpy... "ass crack of dawn"... "I'll kill you..." and all the wiseass comments... pretty funny. But yes, Ryou and Marik centric baby! ; ) You know what would be fitting... Pegasus getting his naked ass strapped to the lab table and being injected with Love Potion #9... aka Yeti? Big white hairy beast? ; )
person e.t.c.
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU ALL ROCK!! xP
person PxC
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled that AFF.net is back up, so now people like me can have their fill of perfectly-written godliness by yee! XD
Um...and I do so love you for making Pegasus-sama mate the Baku-bunny. A lot. XD You have such a delectable lemon-writing talent! I clap for you! *Claps* o_o; XD
[ I'm Pegasus deprived - it's the only well-written/worth-reading Pega!Smutt I've read in a loonngg while. Your fiction is like crack to me at this point - I keep coming back and hoping you've updated, and then if not, re-read the entire thing. XD ]
Ooo...'Everyone' becomes a hybrid? o.o; God, You'd better not abandon this fiction on [me] us! I'll positively cry my eyes out, and spam you with desperate, pleading emails, if you do!! D: lol

Um... Yeah, you rock.
X3
person Tenshi
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Malik. Now he's getting turned into a hybrid.
Somehow I don't see how this story can have a happy ending.
Unless there isn't one at all.
Oh well. Great chapter! Loves it *hearts*
person Devilsheart
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update please Ill give you a cookie, *hands you a cookie* Man all of our guys are being turned into hybrids, *sobsA* but Thats ok I still love them. Update soon and happy writing.
person sglily
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a nice, long chapter! So much going on. My head is spinning! It is really sad to see how Ryou is digressing and how Pegasus is just a horrid ass to him. I am not a fan of Yami but I did enjoy the section where Yami interrupted the meeting to check on Ryou. Ryou admitted that he is losing more of himself the longer he is away from Marik. I was surprised that he is still dreaming of Marik and that he told Yami he still wanted to be with Marik. Does Ryou really have feelings for Pegasus or is it all an act so he isn't considered a "bad bunny" and consequently punished? I've been wondering that since Pegasus "mated" with Ryou bunny and Ryou bunny was having conflicting emotions since he had bonded with his first mate - Marik. And now, Malik is kidnapped thanks to Pegasus. It just keeps getting uglier... ; ) This wasn't what I had in mind when in DEMANDED that the Ryou Bunny be made happy by the way! ; ) Great chapter!
person e.t.c.
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Syra
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You have made me hate Pegasus so much! XD I mean honestly, he is such a sadistic man (though thats not always a bad thing). I can't help but hope for the fluff at the end, and i know that the thing that is feeling bad has to me Marik. He's devoted to him, and i refuse to listen to anything else. Hopefully Pegasus gets his, and please, update more!
person jenn
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that chappie was awsome!!!! hope to read another soon