rate_review Reviews

Oh... my... good chapter. Wow. OK, it is creeping me out that Pegasus is suggesting a threesome... he and Ryou together is just WRONG as it is... adding another... GAH! I was really surprised that possessive, anal Pegasus would allow Ryou to stay overnight with Malik especially since Malik is screaming in his head about Marik and hates Pegasus so much. But, it did give a great opportunity for Malik and Ryou to try to bond. And then, Ryou contemplating helping Malik escape... What the hell is he thinking??? Pegasus would have done more than swat his ass for that one, I'm sure. Ryou going all feral an all to protect Malik was rather amusing. Pegasus punishing the poor Ryou bunny was not. I think I missed something because I didn't understand the motion Ryou made to Malik... gotta go back and reread that. Yeah, didn't think there would be bunions or the like in the story but it was a nicer way than saying FUCKING like rabbits, eh? ; ) Wow! Sequels to look forward to... many many sequels! COOL! You better make the Ryou bunny happy in THIS ONE THOUGH! ; ) Yes, bunny brain-washing... not a pretty picture. Looking forward to more!

I could see Ryo and Malik taking down Pegasus if they went after the doc like that. Of course, they would be wanted by the police. Somehow it needs to come out that humans are being turned into hybirds. I hope Seto steps up to it soon!

Must do more! Must continue writting! Mustn't stop posting chapies! Must stop talking this way! This story is top knotch, easily my fav by far. I love the plot and i freaked out completely when you had Malik kidnapped as well. I would enjoy it if Pegesus died a horrible death or was made into a hybrid. Anyway please continue, it's so good i want to read more.

Hope Malik doesn't lose his spunk. :p

Oh, and Pegasus wasn't a complete asshole in this chapter. o.o That's strange...

Malik is so fiesty! I hope that he remains that way, too! Someone needs to teach Pegasus a lesson and so far, it sure isn't going to be Ryou... And speaking of the Ryou bunny... he's becoming more and more bunnylike with each passing chapter. Poor baby! He needs his lion mate! Make the Ryou bunny happy! (I forgot to put my usual rant in my review last time so you girls will get it twice!) It seems that wacko Pegasus is as least being pleaant to the Ryou bunny... although he better keep his nasty mitts off the bunny! Make the Ryou bunny happy... throw him a lion! Let him escape down his rabbit hole! I'm babbling and ranting but don't mind me. Nice chapter. Creepy with the dolls/Malik/Pegasus storytime bit. Keep up the good work. But remember... happy thoughts... bunnies and lions making pretty little bunions? No! Uh... linnies? libbits? raions? Whatever... you get the picture! ; )

Just another question
Earlier you mentioned that the hybrids were normal sized. Meaning normal sized humans? or animals?

I like this story so much. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will there be a Yami/Seto scene in the next chapter? I have been waiting so long for one?

All I can say is.....WOW...not oh wow, just W.O.W. I don't read many Yugiho fics, but this one caught my interest, and I couldn;t stop reading it!!! I really hope that you update soon...oh by the way,m how does Yami perch? Does he squat at all?? Thanks for writing this!!! You[re doing a great job!!! ^_~

It appears Yami has no choice in the matter of being microchiped. Love the fic update soon

Oh baby. PUMP IT UP, PUMP IT PUMP IT. IT'S HYBRID TIME.