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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person e.t.c.
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a very consistent writer
cheers
person Itavita
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD I'll have you know I hurried my ass along in finishing up my typing of ch 5 of Fate tonight just so I could read this and your other updated stories. I'm glad I did. *jigs*

Go Marik! Finally, someone kicked Rex's smart ass. Oh, and Malik almost biting Pegasus on the behind was just priceless. Too bad Ryou defended his 'mate.' :(

Hope to see Ryou happy soon and AWAY from Pegasus. Something tells me after a couple bouts of sex with Pegasus, he could use a good lion lay. xP
person sglily
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well lookie what I found tonight! Thank you for updating so quickly and with another lovely chapter! I've told you before that I dislike Yami... but my goodness! You two have really made him QUITE the character! He is really funny and even more of a brilliant smart ass! He was cracking me up. And the cock references... too beautiful for words. Poor Bakura... man, you guys are really abusing the hell out of him! I think I won't be sitting for a week after reading what befell our lovely skunk... Damn! OUCH! The whole Ryou being there and Marik watching him on a security monitor was just so sad. Poor Ryou bunny! However, I wanted to slap him up alongside his silly bunny head when he thwarted Malik's attempt at ass munching on Pegasus... Good chapter! Thank you for clarifying the hand motion thingie. I got it now! And hey... make the Ryou bunny happy... : )
person isis53421
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a verry good story. i never review, but for you i will!
I love the bunny!!!
person PxC
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...?!
You're done with this, and have only been posting one chapter a week?!
DAAAA. *Dies*


I know it's the most sensible and fair thing in the world to do, and I'd do it as well, if I was in your position...But can you maybe post another, some time soon, if I beg really, really hard, and buy you a Baku plushie..?
XD

Honestly, it's deserving every review it gets, and is going swimmingly!
I'm a little saddened to hear that Pegasus isn't going to become a hybrid, but ahwell. This fiction really isn't about Pegasus, anyway, so I should just give up. XD
[ Honestly, I’m both amazed and ‘appalled’ at how mesmerically you write him - you capture his childish side very well, but for obvious reasons, you ‘merge’ his childish aspects with his darker tendencies, to make him truly horrifying at times. To me, he seems like a malicious ten-year-old with a magnifying glass couched over an ant hill. *_*; Honestly, I get chills some times reading your Pegasus. XD ]

Um, anyway, I still love you, and am looking forward to each, and every upcoming chapter!!
[ I promise to stop ranting about Pegasus-sama now. >_>; ]
person Istalindir
schedule May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is everything going to turn out okay for Ryou and co.? Please, please say yes!! >.<;; This fic is killing me but it's so good I can't leave!! TT.TT I need to know so I can keep on going... all the brainwashing and stuff is getting to me.. so everything will be alright won't it??
person Itavita
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, Ryou is worse (brainwash wise) than Malik had ever expected. :( Peggy has him trained well.

Glad to see Malik is finally getting his sense back. Hopefully soon he breaks out and goes to reunite with Marik and Bakura. Hybrid smex! xD
person lokivsanubis
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Malik's first word as a hybred is 'Fucker,' very colorful... Anyway. I'm hoping for that Yami/Seto scene and does Yami have a beck? I don't remember what you said about Yami's facial apparence. I feel bad for Ryou again getting in trouble for acting out. And I hope Pegasus forgives him soon or they go back to that bondage room. Xp!
person yunasgrace
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just LOVED Maliks first word XDDDD
i want more... i wanna know how pegasus would treat him when he got him home.
keep on writing
good luck !!!!!
person Devilsheart
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor ryou