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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person LOKIVSANUBIS
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY EVEN MORE. I'M HAPPY RYOU FINALLY HAS SOMEONE. UPDATE SOON!
person miku
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm now in love with this fan fic! I was just wondering whether the animal age like humans do or do they age more simalarly to the animals they are? Can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work! xxx
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more. Thank you for updating so soon. I'm happy Ryou finally has a friend while the others are just getting their grove on. Go seto Go yami. Anyway update soon. I really like your stories and hope everyone is happy in the end.
person Tenshi
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ugh; I'm off schedule, haven't been able to read or review any fics in sometime.
I'm so happy this is taking a more positive. It's always nice when there's hope.
I'm also glad Malik's taking his change well.
I bet it would be adorable to see pictures of them all as hybrids.
Great chapter ^_^
person Itavita
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whee, an update! :D *snuggles*

Poor Ryou, he's so confuzzled. :( He still knows Marik cares about him, but can't understand why he's so attached to Pegasus. Hopefully he finds out about the whole 'programming' he was given when he was morphed into a hybrid. That would probably shed some light on a few things.

Can't wait to read more!
person RabidSqurl
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@_@...wow. I am overwhelmed by the amazing fantasticness of this story.

*drools over your talent*

Not fair. I want to write better. XD

Awesome work; I'm enjoying it very, very, very much.
person sglily
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the frisky Ryou bunny! Scampering all over and excited about Malik coming home... until Malik starts getting some attention from Pegasus... hmm... For some reason, I like it when Ryou bunny has his little hissy fits and strikes out. There is a backbone lurking underneath that soft bunny flesh after all! Malik is learning to be rather slick, eh? Sly as a fox... and then some! It seems that Malik has his work cut out for him trying to undo the brainwashing that has taken hold over the Ryou bunny... The woodPECKER and woody references were rather funny! Nice chapter!
person Istalindir
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey.. Yeah.. I'm back. >.>; Thanks for answering. ^_^ Took a load off my mind. And for that you get.. A box of cookies! Yeah... It's in the mail.. ^_~ And as a side note you made a wonderful choice with Malik, he makes a snazy fox. ^_^ And uke Yami was the best.
person Wolfy Draco
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definately don't like the little hitch there with the loyalty. But the way the plot works out and added it in there makes the story so much better. I'm antsy everything I check the story lists and see if this story has updated. I'm always estatic about reading it.

Poor Ryou and Marik. It's heart break to have that happen. I know everything will work out but it's just so hard to think of what it's like for them.

Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the rest!
person lokivsanubis
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving this story more and more. hope you update soon.

Will Ryou's brain washing cause them a lot of problems later on? Will Marik ever be happy? What about Malik and Bakura... Poor fellows. And you wanna make Seto's hair blue? Interesting.... (imagines Seto being attacked by a flock of pigions... Yami to the rescue!) LOL. Update soon. I wanna know what happens to Ryou. One more thing. Will there be a Pegasus/Malik or a Pegasus/ Ryou/ Malik? Or any NC between either of the two?