rate_review Reviews

Hello! I've finally finished reading what you have up! It's taken me a few days, but they were worth it! I found 'The Jungle' after reading a different one of your stories... I went to your author profile so that I could read more of your fantastic work, and I wasn't dissapointed! Hurry and post more chapters! I'm hungry for more hybrids!

*sits and waits, a plate of delicous bribe-cookies in hand*

I feel bad for Malik. Why does Ryou have to be so mean? He needs to believe Marik is coming for him and not want to stay with Pegassus. Yes i spelled his name wrong for a reason he's an ass and a very dangerous one. Update soon!

o.o Wow, Ryou is a jerk now. Bad Ryou, don't hurt Malik!

Poor Marik, if he sees Ryou like he is now, he'll probably go insane from sorrow. :(

Is it just me or did Chapter 24 get chopped off at the end? I was just wondering since in my PC World, the option to review and all the other AFF crap at the end of a chapter is missing... Regardless, what I read (which was deliciously long as your story has proven time and time again to be) was very well done. Man, that Ryou bunny is a Bitch! That was a rather frightening, enlightening chapter. Malik and Ryou going at it and the nasty, Nasty, NASTY jealous Ryou bunny reared its ugly head. Wow. I was shocked. And the vicious things he wanted to have done to Malik! He needs his ass slapped good and hard! Maybe HE should be sent on a nice long boat ride far, far away... Hmm... Nasty. Depressing. Heartbreaking. I didn't like the Ryou bunny very much in this chapter - brainwashing used as an "excuse" for his behavior or not. And Pegasus... he is just a fucking bastard. He really likes to use the vet as a weapon, doesn't he? Sick fuck. And what is with all of the lavish gifts and surprises for the Ryou bunny all of a sudden? Hmm... good chapter and can't wait for more! You better not disappear over the summer! Your readers need regular updates, babe! : )

Aww poor Malik. Hee hee I love the garden. Bless Ryou for getting his own little vegetable patch.xxx

Please send a link to your art. There are thousands of artists and I can't find yours by a name search.

Very very good story. *sniffs* But I can't find your art!

Marik and Mokuba are like typical little scheming kid brothers who should NEVER be left alone to their own devices! That was just too freakin' funny "enhancing" Bakura's appearance with the blue coloring that Yami favors! Poor Bakura... he didn't know what the hell to think, did he as Yami made advances on him? ; ) Pegasus is even more of a bastard making Ryou believe that he had nothing to fear by going to the vet. I'm beginning to think that Pegasus has a vet fetish... THE RYOU BUNNY IS STILL NOT HAPPY, HATO! It really creeps me out when he calls Pegasus his mate and defends the white-haired freak... also jealousy does not become the Ryou bunny. Oh, and thanks for the angst warning for the next chapter... not! ; )

Poor Malik!!!if it wasnt for Ryou tellin the vet that he had a mate then he wouldnt of had to go through some of the trauma he did ^^"
i dont know if it was just me but this week went by soooo slow and everyday i was checking for an update and each day i checked there wasnt a new one but youve definetly started off my weekend great with this new chap XD

good luck
yunasgrace

Aww, poor Malik. I'd get pissed, too, if I was groped like that. :K

Can't wait for the ANGST! :o