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by jessara40k

schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. A very interesting concept. I’m definitely rooting for Bakura and Ryou to get together.
But that won’t happen unless Ryou accepts himself. Dammit Ryou, stop with all the self-denial!

Great chapter. Keep it up.
person Hezzer
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY doesn't this fic have more reviews?! It should! I was utterly stunned at the amount of detail I found. It was wonderful to find such an immense description in your writing! Please update as soon as you possibly can!
person Anei
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You've cleared up the possible problems of Ryou seeming too passive and nice to Yugi-tachi and of Bakura seeming too submissive. I enjoy the way they're treating Atemu, but that could just be because I like seeing the Pharaoh taken down a peg. It's interesting that you noticed the way Atemu's games always end with some sadistic punishment. Did you notice that the earlier ones usually involved physical danger to both parties as well as mental scarring as a result of Atemu's penalty?
Keep it up,
Anei/hikari_thanatos
person Arainaina
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was interesting.... I hope you update again soon so I can how this ends and that