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person YamiKuro
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should do a second chapter where they do get together! Kukukukuku...

I loved it! IT WAS AWESOME!

Kuro
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggleclap* I hate you for making Seto evil, you know that? I want to see his side of the story ^^. I'm surehe has a perfectly reasonable explanation. ^~^ But, still, I love the evil yami.

Back to Cycles now!
person Tinka
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I would LOVE a sequal. I adore both those pairings!

Seto got what he desirved too.

Poor Bakura. I know he'd hate it, but when i read "those had nothing to do with last night" about the tear tracks.. i was like "omfg*cry*" Poor diddums. He loved baka malik. Just a question about them btw.. you said that he told Ryou about Marik.. did he tell him about Malik too? *shrugs* i thought maybe it was a typo.

He should take to Yami about it. Lol. Gods i love them together. Gods that was so hot.
I vote you do a "meanwhile" scene for the hikari sex Lol! ^^

SEQUALSEQUAL!!! Loved it.
person ShadowRaven
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!! But what happened to Kaiba?? Exactly how much did he get Punished? Because Yami and Bakura may have sent all their pain to him but what happened to him physically besides him screaming and acting like a baby? Do ya think that you can give your fans some more answers, Pretty Please. ^__^
person Darkstar
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,,thank you