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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! PANCAKES! XD lol.
Can't... resist... THE CUTENESS! Imagining Ryou holding a female Bakura makes for an interesting mental image, but an adorable one nonetheless. ^_^
I know you can't answer this question because it'll probably be answered later in the story, but I can't help but ask: What's up with the pain in Kura-chan's side? Is it some sort of Psychological pain? o_O
I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^_^ *Dances*
Can't... resist... THE CUTENESS! Imagining Ryou holding a female Bakura makes for an interesting mental image, but an adorable one nonetheless. ^_^
I know you can't answer this question because it'll probably be answered later in the story, but I can't help but ask: What's up with the pain in Kura-chan's side? Is it some sort of Psychological pain? o_O
I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^_^ *Dances*
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forget about my question. Garsh I'm stupid. I can't believe I didn't realize what it was before. -_- *Slaps head*
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! The sequel is here! Hurrah! ^_________________________^
Ahem, now that I've got that out of my system... Congratulations on the first chapter of the sequel! *Sigh* I just can't get over how cute Bakura and Ryou are when they try to understand their feelings for each other. Also, I must say that I'm extremely curious to see what happens in this story; the plot, the fluff, the drama! You know, the works! ^_^
I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^___O <---(Keeping an eye out) Lol!
Ahem, now that I've got that out of my system... Congratulations on the first chapter of the sequel! *Sigh* I just can't get over how cute Bakura and Ryou are when they try to understand their feelings for each other. Also, I must say that I'm extremely curious to see what happens in this story; the plot, the fluff, the drama! You know, the works! ^_^
I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^___O <---(Keeping an eye out) Lol!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Isis! Cramping? *winces* Ryou is NOT going to be able to talk Bakura through a period, you realize that? Poor guy couldn't even talk about sexuality, though it would be funny to see him trying to discuss this with her. *giggles* It'd be funny to have Serenity over and debating tampons versus pads with Kura. I can't see her as a pad girl, though..too bulky..but tampons might weird her out too. Ra, this is too funny!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there again! Wow, you’re really into stories with gender-bending huh? Darn…and you really did a brilliant job with Snow in the Sahara and Make Like a Banana (sigh). Anyway, I still love your work and I think it would be quite interesting to have a relatively ‘dominant’ Ryou for once, although, I’m still trying to condition myself to reading a female Bakura for later ‘limey’ situations.
I think you’ve indicated somewhere that you’re going to make this story worthy of AFF.net and I know it’s your decision to make the scenes as limey as what you want it to be, but please don’t write these lime scenes a little too extreme. Not to be demanding or anything, but I would really love it if this story will retain its sensual quality without the typical scenes that constitute the ‘typical’ lime in stories. I don’t know how you’re going to interpret this but I sincerely hope that you’re not going to take this comment the wrong way. It would be nice to know at least one author who writes this type of scenes and turn them into more than the satisfaction of the carnal endeavors of these two characters, which I happen to really love.
As for the due parts in this story, don’t worry about writing them since I also happen to like them and would love to read Yugioh stories that do not focus on pairings and all that fluffy or smutty stuff from time to time. Hmm…just wondering, don’t you think it’s weird that most fanfiction written about this anime usually has the most graphic smut, rape, and torture scenes when it’s supposedly a show for kids? Sometimes, reading Yugioh stories that include more of the typical ‘save-the-world-theme’ and none of the shonen-ai pairings really makes me guilty of ever reading yaoi stories…oh well.
So, I guess I’ll just be seeing you in the next chapters! Ja ne! ^_^
I think you’ve indicated somewhere that you’re going to make this story worthy of AFF.net and I know it’s your decision to make the scenes as limey as what you want it to be, but please don’t write these lime scenes a little too extreme. Not to be demanding or anything, but I would really love it if this story will retain its sensual quality without the typical scenes that constitute the ‘typical’ lime in stories. I don’t know how you’re going to interpret this but I sincerely hope that you’re not going to take this comment the wrong way. It would be nice to know at least one author who writes this type of scenes and turn them into more than the satisfaction of the carnal endeavors of these two characters, which I happen to really love.
As for the due parts in this story, don’t worry about writing them since I also happen to like them and would love to read Yugioh stories that do not focus on pairings and all that fluffy or smutty stuff from time to time. Hmm…just wondering, don’t you think it’s weird that most fanfiction written about this anime usually has the most graphic smut, rape, and torture scenes when it’s supposedly a show for kids? Sometimes, reading Yugioh stories that include more of the typical ‘save-the-world-theme’ and none of the shonen-ai pairings really makes me guilty of ever reading yaoi stories…oh well.
So, I guess I’ll just be seeing you in the next chapters! Ja ne! ^_^
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so glad you decided to do a sequel to Powerless! I'd read it on ff.net and was hooked, even told friends about it. I truly hope that we'll see some Ryou and Bakura action. Those two are a great couple to read about and this should be interesting in many ways. I hope you'll keep working on this! Great job!