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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Bakura. She thinks that Ryou only loves her as a sister. *Puppy-dog pout* I can't wait to see her reaction once she finds out how Ryou really thinks of her.
Ryou's conversation with Yugi and the Pharaoh realy did make Ryou sound like a love-struck teen, so good job with that! I'm looking forward to seeing Ryou's reaction to the Pharaoh's discovery! ^.^ It's absolutely amazing how you'reb able to get the characters to deal with such complex emotions and situations yet you still keep them in character! ...I don't think I'll ever be able to get over that. ^.^;
Ryou's conversation with Yugi and the Pharaoh realy did make Ryou sound like a love-struck teen, so good job with that! I'm looking forward to seeing Ryou's reaction to the Pharaoh's discovery! ^.^ It's absolutely amazing how you'reb able to get the characters to deal with such complex emotions and situations yet you still keep them in character! ...I don't think I'll ever be able to get over that. ^.^;
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! Thats was funny, oh, the irony!! lol. PMS can be a bitch, bu what Bakura said , its true, but in Ryou's case it most definitely is love! Ooh, what's Ryou gonna do? Hell, whats Bakura-chan gonna do? lol. Its hard to be a girl! Gods, but if they both accept their feelings, Either one's gonna get laid! lol. Continue with this story, Ochodre-kun, because its fucking fantastic!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH!!! MORE!!!
I've been loving this ever since you starting posting it. I can't wait to see how Ryou reacts to Yami's personality. And is there anyway of having that broomstick removed from the Pharaoh's ass? Honestly, it just doesn't seem to suit him. It'd be kinda cool if Bakura managed to do something to bring Yami into a more contributing member of society. Sheesh, not even helping Grandpa?
Fantastic job on reflecting inner emotions and thoughts on both part.
I've been loving this ever since you starting posting it. I can't wait to see how Ryou reacts to Yami's personality. And is there anyway of having that broomstick removed from the Pharaoh's ass? Honestly, it just doesn't seem to suit him. It'd be kinda cool if Bakura managed to do something to bring Yami into a more contributing member of society. Sheesh, not even helping Grandpa?
Fantastic job on reflecting inner emotions and thoughts on both part.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I love how it's developing. All too often we see a story rush into lemons and/or limes. Yours lets the story progress and draws the readers in. (Not to mention, you have stayed true to each character's original design). I personally love the character development over this story and it's prequel. My hat's off to you. You are one fantastic author.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great. IMO you could get away with putting this up on FF.net, but if you'd rather play it safe that's understandable.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on another great chapter! I can't wait for the rest of chapter seven to come out!
*Sigh* I almost feel sorry for poor gender-confused Bakura... almost. *Evil smirk* Ryou and Bakura will always make a cute couple, no matter what their gender may be! ^.^
I can't wait to find out how Bakura will react to the dream once she wakes up. Perhaps she'll come one step closer to admitting her feelings for Ryou to him? Or perhaps she'll try even harder to hide them?
*Sigh* I almost feel sorry for poor gender-confused Bakura... almost. *Evil smirk* Ryou and Bakura will always make a cute couple, no matter what their gender may be! ^.^
I can't wait to find out how Bakura will react to the dream once she wakes up. Perhaps she'll come one step closer to admitting her feelings for Ryou to him? Or perhaps she'll try even harder to hide them?
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so love thiss story but I have to say Ryou should in the tonment get to be in the finals with Barkura
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd let you know that I love this story, and the way you write this pairing. Your potrayal of the characters are much more realistic and beleivable then most of the fanfictions that I've read. You're a great author, keep up the good work.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou and Bakura dancing? THAT'S SO KAWAII! ^0^
Oh, and I absolutely loved the part where Bakura got Yugi, Joey, and Tristan to pick up there mess. *Sigh* If only I could do that...
I'm very interested to find out about Kaiba's new dueling system. During the first season, when the gang went into the virtual world for the first time, was one of my favorite parts of the show. I can't wait to see what ideas you've come up with for the RPG plot. Since Kaiba got the idea from the pharaoh's Memory World, does that mean that the game will have an Ancient Egyptian setting?
Thank you for another chapter. Even though I'll miss the daily updates, I appreciate the fact that you take your time in writing your story so that it will be even better! ^.^
Oh, and I absolutely loved the part where Bakura got Yugi, Joey, and Tristan to pick up there mess. *Sigh* If only I could do that...
I'm very interested to find out about Kaiba's new dueling system. During the first season, when the gang went into the virtual world for the first time, was one of my favorite parts of the show. I can't wait to see what ideas you've come up with for the RPG plot. Since Kaiba got the idea from the pharaoh's Memory World, does that mean that the game will have an Ancient Egyptian setting?
Thank you for another chapter. Even though I'll miss the daily updates, I appreciate the fact that you take your time in writing your story so that it will be even better! ^.^
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see that Bakura finally got to experience one of the many joys of womanhood. LOL. *Sigh* I wouldn't wish that fate on my worst enemies.
And is it just me or ar Yugi-tachi being rude? I could never imagine a person going to someone's house and ignoring the host, then making a mess and falling asleep, though I guess I could imagine Joey and Tristan doing that. Oh well, *Sigh* boys will be boys... excpet for in Bakura's case. xD
Oh my, looks like Bakura and Ryou are becoming more... comfortable around each other. ^_~ And I love the bath drawing you did; it was so cute and you have such a unique drawing style. I LOVE IT!
And is it just me or ar Yugi-tachi being rude? I could never imagine a person going to someone's house and ignoring the host, then making a mess and falling asleep, though I guess I could imagine Joey and Tristan doing that. Oh well, *Sigh* boys will be boys... excpet for in Bakura's case. xD
Oh my, looks like Bakura and Ryou are becoming more... comfortable around each other. ^_~ And I love the bath drawing you did; it was so cute and you have such a unique drawing style. I LOVE IT!