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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story will you be continuing this any time soon?
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey, it's me, i followed you link and i'm so glad i did! and i read the AN, so you're getting individual reviews!
i gotta say i love the duel, even knowing how they're such a pain in the ass to write; it was nice to see just how much had changed between them and how Ryou's starting to catch things Bakura was easily seeing in 'Powerless'.
and the ending was so cute!!!
i gotta say i love the duel, even knowing how they're such a pain in the ass to write; it was nice to see just how much had changed between them and how Ryou's starting to catch things Bakura was easily seeing in 'Powerless'.
and the ending was so cute!!!
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, poor Ryou, thinking he can't have her. And poor Bakura for not knowing how to let him know. I think they both need to get some advice from people not Yugi and Atemu. Seto has a habit of being blunt and tactless; that would definitely work... If the tournament turns out well for them. Here's hoping for an update soon to put an end to their stalemate! :)
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is SUPERB! I hope you can update soon.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great story! I just finished chapter 9 and can't wait to see what happens next!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! You're so evil, but in a good way of course! I feel so bad for Ryou right now. It's hard to have feelings for someone when you don't think that their feelings are returned.
And the rejection Bakura's going through is just as bad! There are few things out there that can hurt more than the ache in one's heart when bthey realize that they aren't loved.
Isn't it ironic that when people get closer to each other they tend to push the other away?
And the rejection Bakura's going through is just as bad! There are few things out there that can hurt more than the ache in one's heart when bthey realize that they aren't loved.
Isn't it ironic that when people get closer to each other they tend to push the other away?
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention, this story is written so well, keeping so much with each character's original personality, that I could easily believe that this was cannon! I would not know it was fanfiction if it wasn't on this site! You are a masterful writer.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhh need another update!!!! Alright, yes I am kicking myself for having put off reading this. but I did sit down today and read it start to finish! Another wonderful piece of work!! So please, please for my sanity update soon!!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I soo lovr this story
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! My friend was right, this is a good story! Can't wait to read more!