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by Rroselavy

schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ficlet! :D I was expecting a quick pwp, but you pleasantly surprised me with how much care and detail you put into the events leading to that delicious bathtub scene. The quick change in them acting towards each other quirked me just the slightest bit and well, I'll just write it off to Kaiba being sick, lol. Nice job!
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I think, Jou was pining for nothing. They both wanted the same thing.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story :D
person minn yun
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like! jou the nurse and not-so-patient kaiba the patient...and nurse jou...now that just gave me ideas...thank you for writing fever!
person ...
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot hun! another kick-ass ficcy that you did here!!!!! i really liked it! it was an excellent shotta, although i /could/ see a sequel comming out of it *hint hint/nudge nudge*...................anyways! great awesome-ness ((there is just something uber hot that i find about seto and jou getting it on in water.......big tubs, pools, showers.......you name it, it's hot ^^.........of course, i like bakura/ryou fics in the shower, as well......^^))..........hmmmmmmm..........keep it up rose', luv ((and seto and jou can keep it up as well ^.~))............and stay in good health!.........*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt!
person Wicabeth
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wibbles* That was awesome! I actually just read it over at Little Dragon, but decided to review here and help boost your numbers =D

Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy *^-^*
person LilyChan
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. *_* You never cease to amaze me with your random bouts of love. X3 I love you for that <333
person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great fic - bravo, I says. Very sweet, too. ^^ I found it slightly strange how they just went straight to the bath with no sudden moment of revelation that the other feels the same way that they do as there is in most fics, but it didn't really bother me. Nicely done!
person Jou-pup
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really nice story. It was quite refreshing to read.
Jou is so going to be sick after that though. But it's okay, Kaiba will nurse him back to health. XD
person Sammei
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...hot. X3 Very nicely done. Very sweet, but very sexy at the same time. I can't give you a better review for the fact that my brain has turned to mush because of this fic. Hehe. In a good way! Anyhow.. when's the sequel? ;D