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that was sexy! as a yaoi fangirl, i loved it!

Yes- you deserve a great review for this! I enjoyed it. I'm amazed Alister lasted as long as he did before letting every in the house know how good he was feeling! Thanks!

Sweet, very sweet. A very nice choice of pairing as well, very daring. In fact, I can remember seeing this particular one done only once before and even then it was only passingly mentioned. The storyline was one of the finest of true PWP traditions and I very much liked how you played it out. Your writing style is nice to read, although some minor misspellings had slipped in. Another minor thing was how you constantly used their names, something that can get a bit tiresome. The characterizations were cool, although could've used a bit more depth. Yeah, I know, PWP, but as such they seemed a bit too generic...
All in all, you've written another lovely and very hot YGO fic.

OMFG!!!!!!! That was better than I expected....I am majorly drooling here...Atemu......Alister.....Both very very very naughty...And naughty with each other...You so deserve a a review....Who'd a thought that a thought from my mind of Alister/Atemu together would be this FREAKIN' HOT!!!!!

ALISTER...................ATEMU................My Loves together at last in a yaoi story.....(My other love is still Seto Kaiba...Just ask IceAngel)

This was one HOT FIC....People would probably think we are 2 disturbed indiviuals....We do have freaky twisted minds....But they are our minds....

DreamPrincess