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for Maybe I Do

by Raventide

schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh lawrd!!!! Nicely done...i would love to see the parents reactions beyond that now...no doubt their father was ready to murder them...their poor mother...
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo glad you made this... There is a complete and utter lack of these fics in the fandom.
person holysinner1986
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lolz! that has gotta be one of the funniest fics i have ever read and your writing is really clear and detailed. keep it up!
person AnImEbUnNy612
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha,Ha,and..........HA!!!!!!!!!!That was so funny!!!!!!J/K But, that was hot, sexy,and fucking funny, Man!!!!!!!!!!^-^
person AnImEbUnNy612
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha,Ha, and HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so funny!!!!!!!!!!< just weted myself>J/K But,that was hot, sexy, and fucking funny!!!!!!!!!!^-^
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*in total hysterical laughter* Oh God that was FUCKIN' HILARIOUS! You have got to write more storys like that, I had to frickin' wait a few minutes before writing this review. Keep it Comin' and do you think you can write an epilogue for this story. Pretty Please... ^.^
person Reyn
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL. cute ending
person singer_34
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh! Can I go to hell with them?? Amazing job!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*busts up laughing* Oh damn!! that is too funny! So is this going to be a one shot or multi-chapter? you have it set up to go beautifully either way! Great job!
person Renee
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A fair bit on the corny and cliched side, but when the parents walked in, I burst out laughing. Great work, not a bad lemon.