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Yeah, it should be called Dreaming Wide Awake.

Haha

Yeah, I know you posted it somewhere with this title, just can't remember where.

Anyway, let me re-read this 'cause I hardly remember what it was about.

Wow, thank you all so much! I'm glad you liked the story! I guess I'll be posting more here. I probably will go with something about dreams for the title. My friends are actually refering to this as "The Brocoli Story," or, "You Make Me Go All Mushy." I don't think I'll use either of those though (I actually think the second is rather cute). Thank you for your suggestions though. I love the dream ideas.

wow *stands* a little wobbly. *falls back into chair* that was very good
^^squee! aww
i have a title suggestion howbout "hidden feelings"? or "doubt"?

I like it because it really does have a teen feel for it. And connecting both Seto and
Jou like they are normal teens is well put. I will see if I can change the rating to a four.
And I would like to try the suggestive.
How about Heavenly Dreams?
Tell me what you think.
Keep up the good work.
Sliver Rose Fox
A.K.A
Foxxy.^_*

good story, interesting idea. call it dreams maybe?

Yum yum yum.