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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice this story is really hot
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O...........M................G................. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAL! OMG! DROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL. That was hott! I just knew Malik would get it! I was holding my breath too. LOL I Just KNEw it! Malik is so sexy! And yes! A Malik/Bakura!!!! Hopefully. I love the nickname "Fuckalicious"!!!!!!!!!!!! Jesus, that's sexy! You're awesome! Fantastic! This fic is so fcuking delicious! And Malik on the beach, pure bliss. ~SQUEAL~ I can't stop laughing when I think about Ryou and his eleven inches! That's so hilarious! Don't worry, Malik. You're so gorgeous, even Ryou's size won't be able to compare to your body. :D ~smirk~ And Bakura as the bad-ass, perfect! I love this! I can't wait for more parts with Maly and Bakura! Sweetness! This is so original! And Duke! YES! Thank the Lord you let Yugi go. I HAte that shrimp. X_X You go, man! Wonderful! So many compliments! Please, PLEASE update soon! This is fantastic! ~two thumbs-way-WAY-up~ Poor Ryou! ROFL Marik, stop pushing my man! Bakura, stop thinking about everyone except Malik. LOL
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.. oh please continue.. this is so .. cool...
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing caught my eye; it's dominant, not dominate :) I like the story though, so it was enough to distract away from simple spelling errors :D
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad this story is back! I remember reading it before and was really sad that it just sort of died. I hope you continue it, it's really hot.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad to see this story up and running again! I was trying to find it again a few months ago and couldn't and I was like, 'Oh, fuck, no! It couldn't have possibly been deleted, could it?'...But now I can rest peacefully and know that it's back! I truly love this concept! Highly original and highly erotic! I know I'm sick in the head, but I totally want to see Bakura and Ryou together! They are just too cute together! And what made you not want Joey (or Jou) in this fic? Just curious...I hope you update soon because I really want to know what you have in store for each sexy bishie! Thanks! Ja! ^_^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good fic write more.