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*is softly panting*....shite! that.....that was.......HOT!....*runs off to take a cold shower*......((voice: heheheh.......yah.......as you can see, she 'liked' that little bit of lemony heaven ^.~)) *her voice comes from the shower* voice, goddamnit! why the hell do you always have to make it come off like i'm some kinda perv?!!!!.....((....'cause you are?........*malicious grin*.......heheheh.......anyways........she would like me to tell you that you did a-and i quote- "kick-arse job".........who the hell says arse, anyways? it's not like she's brittish......she lives in fucking /california/ for gods' sakes!........but oh well.......wait....)) *more shouting is heard* don't make fun of my words!!!!!!!.........and don't forget that other thing!...........((oh yah.........she would also like me to tell you that if you aren't reading maggiemay's 'rumors' you should..........she says that's a fucking good story as well.......)) *an exasperated tone* voice!!!...............((*sigh* she would also like me to apologize for all my fucking cussing *smirk*.............hmmmm........oh yes, she wouldn't say this for fear of 'being a burden' but i think 'what the hell, if you can't be a burden on other people, what's the point of living?'.........if you do make another story send her an email)) voice!...((i mean /please/ send her an email........kami! you'd think she was writing a book on manners or something!!!!!!))..........*gets out of the shower dripping wet* well, bye love and i hope you doanother story! *hugs* sorry about getting you wet -^^-.......ja ne!

You better update soon... that was just a mean cliffhanger.

It was really good, just try to lenthen it out more.

MY puppy!!!!

Aw this is so sweet, please continue!!

Oooo.

wow what a story this is great please update soon

wonderful story!!!! Must continue!

OMG beautifully written. I love it.

AIYEEEE!!! YA DAMNED TEMPTRESS!!! THAT WAS ~SOOO~ EVIL!!!!....BUT ~SOOOO~ GOOD!!!!...I absolutely love this chapter!...What will Jou think now that he heard Seto's ultimate secret?..will he chalk it up to the fever?..will he confront Seto about it?..will Kaiba's fever break enough for him to realize he let his attraction slip?...so many questions!...and the visual of Jou's tantilizing pecks underneath that soakin' wet shirt were not helping!...EVIL, EVIL WOMAN!!!...I'd scorn you, but I need you to finish this story first...hmmm, maybe after....love ya and thanks for another awesome chapter! ^-^

*cries in excited joy*........YES!!!! SETO SAID THAT HE LOVES JOU-PUP!!!!!!! I /NEED/ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!! I WANT THEM TO KISS!!!!!!!...................HELL, I WANT THEM TO FUCK!!!!!!!! ((in a loving way of course ^.~))................PLEASE HURRY OH GODDESS OF YAOI!!!!!!!!! *bows down* PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!................................