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for On hidden paths

by darkangel985

person tk04
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awh that so cute they got to be together and have hot sex. Love it. That what i am taking about. Thank you.
person Mazu
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~i think i have read this before~
person Mazu
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh now i remember! nvm love the story!!!
person StarAWings
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah! this is just so cute! and jou has ADD? thats awsome! I also have an disorder like that!
anyway good fic!its great!
person giggly gal
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...why do they need a condom? They're both guys...I mean, nobody's going to get pregnant....


person Linku
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love it! That line -"So beautiful Jou. Want you. Like you. Love you."- will forever be burned in my mind. I was kinda jealous of the nurse who got to walk in on them. Who wouldn't want to walk in on that? Two hot bishounen... so nice
person MilkShake
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YaY!!!
person Jessica
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the cute story! It was a blast and the way Seto was so gentle with Jou...very cute! Great job and I hope to see you around with another! Ja! ^___^
person Chikky
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... wow. That was... um. Hot~!

Please write again. I only really read Seto/Jou and Honda/Otogi... so yeah but I'll read it if you write it XD~!

See you on the next story~~!!
person Jessica
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Make-out session!...I'm glad you said one more chapter to go, because thet was the worst cliffhanger you laid out on us!...Who had the nerve to interrupt our puppy and his master?!...^-^...very cute, btw! I love how Seto said that Jou had a 'pretty blush'! CY_UTE! Can't wait for the final chapter!