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by ainm49

person mysticneko
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why the hell did he have KY gel in his pocket?! That was funny though. I've never read a KaibaxYugi... Not bad. Except for the whole not knowing if it was Yugi or Yami. You should have said which was which even if Kaiba didn't know the difference.
person Reyn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo! oo! I bet he was gonna try to get into Joey's pants!!

anyways, good job! It definitely proved interesting ^_^