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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is sooooo good!! Please hurry up an update this! I really really really really wanna know what happens next!! Poor Yugi, Malik, and Ryou! Please hurry up and have Bakura and Marik kidnap Ryou and Malik..... and then make the bad guyz PAY!!!!
~ChibiRinni^.~
~ChibiRinni^.~
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is quite good, but you DO need help with punctuation. Look. It looks like THIS, "Periods are your friends. They stay by the first word, but a space away from the other." Okay. Thank you. Other than that, it's interesting. You might wanna work on the punctation.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought this story was dead *cries* i really liked this chapter and the dream sequence was ok, i'm excited for the next chapter so please continue writing.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAY!! Your Back *jumps author for hug* and you updated i have been waiting for it, then you reviewed me and told me about your computer, that sucks. i was wondering what happened to you, but i love your story sooo much ^.^ if your wandering who i am, i'm ladygodess from FF, but Dark Necrofear here. ^.^ but update soon, here or FF i don't care where just as long as you do ^.^ by.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i personally love this fic! don't worry about the dream sequence it was awesome! anyway i really hope you update soon....
looking forward to readingn your next chapter!
Ja!
looking forward to readingn your next chapter!
Ja!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is really great but, no offense or anything, it needs a little work with grammer and spelling issues. I'm willing to help if you want me to. I don't mind helping and I'll completely understand if you don't want me to. Just let me know either way please. Keep up the cool work!
----------Becca
----------Becca
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! love it!!! love it!!! love it!!! UPDATE VERY VERY SOON!!!!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* Soooo cool! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next. So damn coooooooool!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want you to know, that your fiction is guilty in seducing me to like Malik and Marik.
And to like these kind of pairing O.O
I waited so desperately for the Yamis to come and kick some ass... an what happens? it gets worse -.-
I guess I'll get another reason to hope, that the two bakas will soon come to earth an "claw" some people >_<
though there are some spelling mistakes in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it, but hope that these two demons get their asses down to earth soon XD
And to like these kind of pairing O.O
I waited so desperately for the Yamis to come and kick some ass... an what happens? it gets worse -.-
I guess I'll get another reason to hope, that the two bakas will soon come to earth an "claw" some people >_<
though there are some spelling mistakes in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it, but hope that these two demons get their asses down to earth soon XD
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did really enjoy reading these two chapters. especially as AFFN seems to have some Sort problems I am really happy that you're updating very fast.
I like that idea of this... foursome? *scratches her head and considers if it´s the right translation* Especially as I normally dislike that BakuraXMarik pairing... but in this fiction it fits and I like it that way ^-^
I hope you won't let them suffer too much... *glomps the poor Hikaris*
I like that idea of this... foursome? *scratches her head and considers if it´s the right translation* Especially as I normally dislike that BakuraXMarik pairing... but in this fiction it fits and I like it that way ^-^
I hope you won't let them suffer too much... *glomps the poor Hikaris*