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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*has coffee stolen* Oh evilness...pretty chapter, though! ^____^ Me liked! Me liked Mariku's seduciness too, very much...is that even a word? oO If not, I just invented it. Seduciness. =^^= Keep going, BayBee!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated!! I'm sooo glad!! I loved it! Very good!!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i loved the long chapter
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was recommended this (as is always the case) and I'm really enjoying it so far, especially as yamishipping is one of my favourite pairings!
The scenes where Yami was on his own at the beginning were brilliant, there was a lot of thought put behind them I feel and the emotions came across really well. I could really understand how Yami was feeling and felt a bit scared as well. The same goes for Ryou's mentions (well, he wasn't there so they can't be called scenes) and don't worry, I understood the explanation Yami gave about Ryou meeting his boyfriend. But I REALLY want to know who it is now...you must tell us soon! Mariku annoyed me as much as he annoyed Bakura too, which I suppose is a good thing in terms of you portraying the character so that he gets on the reader's nerves.
Anyways, grammar and spelling are good (which is very important in a story, even if some authors don't think so) and I'll be waiting for the next chapter, I promise!
S. Chensu xxx.
The scenes where Yami was on his own at the beginning were brilliant, there was a lot of thought put behind them I feel and the emotions came across really well. I could really understand how Yami was feeling and felt a bit scared as well. The same goes for Ryou's mentions (well, he wasn't there so they can't be called scenes) and don't worry, I understood the explanation Yami gave about Ryou meeting his boyfriend. But I REALLY want to know who it is now...you must tell us soon! Mariku annoyed me as much as he annoyed Bakura too, which I suppose is a good thing in terms of you portraying the character so that he gets on the reader's nerves.
Anyways, grammar and spelling are good (which is very important in a story, even if some authors don't think so) and I'll be waiting for the next chapter, I promise!
S. Chensu xxx.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Preeeeetty, Ryn-chan..*dips cookies inot her coffee and nods thoughtfully* Yes, pretty...just the thing for breakfast. ^____^ Good job, you. *pats and loves*
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I love this chappie!!! Can't wait for me!!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee! yes! Piercings! Oh yummy, yummy things...*cough* And...I didn't get that joke. o.O But I am sure you will explain to me. *chibi eyes* See you, love *loves*
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow so rypou is pregnant
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the chappie, hate the cliffy. But I already told you that on IM, didn't I? *grins* Can't wait for more!!