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for Seraph

by jessara40k

person Indo
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I kinda lost your fic for a while and my computer had issues, so I finnally got to read your updates (chpt 13 & 14) and I think they are really good. I hope you continue to work on this story as it is incredibly good!
person Indo
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Finnally!! I've been waiting ages for the update!! Great fic by the way!! ^^ Happy writting!! ^^
person Tiamat
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how Ryou/Seraph is acting! hehe and the thought of a femmy Shadow had me drooling! I cant wait to see what happens......especially since Yugi is slowly changing..and it doesn't seem like he's changing for the better either!
person burgundy@cutey.com
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! You've turned Bakura Ryou into a marysue, but worse, because you're mangling an actual character. The plot's weak, although somewhat original, just badly executed.