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for Drought

by shipposister

person Luca
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Veeery cute! Excellent correlation between rain and their drying relationship.
person InHuman Lover
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i must knw what happen hext so you have to get the next cahpters up soon im dying of suspence here and that not kool i hate dying with out knwing what going to happen next so hurry up and post the next few chapters
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story must go on and on and on forever and ever or til it finished


hurry and get the next chapter up soon
person silverfox
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was unexspected i really like this so keep up the great work and update soon can't wait to read what happens next hope every thing gets back to normal soon or at least better
person Missy Elliot
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sings* And I can't stand the rain!!!!

Meloveth you long time.
person Jessica
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...'post 1 chap per 5 reviews', eh?...does that mean there could be more to this little ficcie?...if so, I can't wait to read more...I like the way you had Kaiba kick Jou's door open, but at the same time I was like, 'Kaiba, how could you?! You know he lives in a bad neighborhood!'...but anyway, I like the way you portrayed both characters: Jou for his isolation and unkempt grunginess (tho when u described it, he sounded absolutely delicious! *SCMACK!*...^_^...) and Seto for dealing with the reprocussions of Jou's departure...I loved it all!
person Jinx
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was soo sweet right more pleeeeeeaaassse.
person Wicabeth
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like I said at little_dragon, this story is SO good! You're really becoming a wonderful authoress! *glomples*

Have a nekkid bishie of your choice that's tied up with ribbons as a way of congratulating!
person fire_lilly
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe kawaii! is there another chapter or six? I like it it's so cute and I want to read more PLEASE!
person chosa
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's cute. I like it. Thouigh we you a bit vague in certain areas but hey, I still like it. ^_^