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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! *laughing so hard I'm crying* That was good. I adored it. Please continue..... something. ^.^
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great....For weeks now I've been trying to find a good yaoi fic to read and I finally find one...I loved this...It was awesome....Good job....
~*DreamPrincess*~
~*DreamPrincess*~
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again...:)*still has smile on face despite the stupid computer not working*
Well, THAT didn't work. *whacks computer* AS I was saying...Fabulous job! You did a great job of characterizations - it's nice to find writers who can really create characters and come up with original plots. :D
I also really liked that the characters never really got OOC, and when they DID act different then the anime, there was good reason for it. (poor Seto, having the truth forced on him like a slap in the face lol) And I can so see Yugi having that sort of one-sided, flustered conversation with himself...that was great! :) I have to wonder though, what did you have in mind between Yugi and Yami? You seemed to hint at...stuff behind the scenes a bit. *is curious* There seem to be all sorts on plot bits you could play with here...*looks hopeful*;)
This was a great first story! So...when can we espect the next one? ;)
Keep writing!
-K.M.
Well, THAT didn't work. *whacks computer* AS I was saying...Fabulous job! You did a great job of characterizations - it's nice to find writers who can really create characters and come up with original plots. :D
I also really liked that the characters never really got OOC, and when they DID act different then the anime, there was good reason for it. (poor Seto, having the truth forced on him like a slap in the face lol) And I can so see Yugi having that sort of one-sided, flustered conversation with himself...that was great! :) I have to wonder though, what did you have in mind between Yugi and Yami? You seemed to hint at...stuff behind the scenes a bit. *is curious* There seem to be all sorts on plot bits you could play with here...*looks hopeful*;)
This was a great first story! So...when can we espect the next one? ;)
Keep writing!
-K.M.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! :) (<--see? smile on my face! lol)
Fabulous job! You've done well with getting the characters across - it's a treat to find writers who can put personality into their characters and originality into their stories. Bravo!
I was also impressed that the characters never really got OOC, and when they acted unlike the anime, there was always a good reason for it (poor Seto, getting the truth forced into him like a slap on the face like that lol). And I can just picture Yugi having that sort of flustered, one-sided conversation with himself! That was great! But I have to wonder what's going on there with him an Yami though...you seemed to hint at...stuff behind the scenes a bit. *is curious*
This was a great first story! So....when can we expect the next one? ;)
Keep writing!
-K.M.
Fabulous job! You've done well with getting the characters across - it's a treat to find writers who can put personality into their characters and originality into their stories. Bravo!
I was also impressed that the characters never really got OOC, and when they acted unlike the anime, there was always a good reason for it (poor Seto, getting the truth forced into him like a slap on the face like that lol). And I can just picture Yugi having that sort of flustered, one-sided conversation with himself! That was great! But I have to wonder what's going on there with him an Yami though...you seemed to hint at...stuff behind the scenes a bit. *is curious*
This was a great first story! So....when can we expect the next one? ;)
Keep writing!
-K.M.