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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Prefect, just prefect...
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanx, I Love Reading Storys That Make Me Laugh:) GOOD JOB
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing...love your writing style ^__^
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Cute and sweet -- surely that was what you were intending it to be? It would've been nice to have a reason as to why Seto didn't show up for those few days during and right at the end of summer, but since it's from Jou's POV, it's understandable. And like that one reviewer said -- this plotline could've easily been stretched to fill 10 chapters, yet you managed to fit it into a quaint little one-shot, and that is a great feat in itself.
=) I love the whole "You're in my spot" deal. Keep up the brilliant work; I look forward to reading more of your stories.
=) I love the whole "You're in my spot" deal. Keep up the brilliant work; I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooh!! kawaiiii!! that was just so cute~ good job
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww....that was sweet. ^___^ I really loved it. Especially the end. And very Seto-like, the way the whole "You're in my spot" thing is sort of his way of showing he cares. In the sense that if he didn't, he wouldn't bother saying any thing....he'd just automatically get him kicked out of the park. O__o I have a feeling that all along, it wasn't the heat that kept him from arguing. Well....at least not the weather any way. ^_~! *nudge nudge* Very good job.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really cute.
a new way of saying 'i love you'?
yup, definitely Seto-ish! ^__^
a new way of saying 'i love you'?
yup, definitely Seto-ish! ^__^
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Uber sweetness! That not only had me hot and bothered, but I just love the idea that Seto is somewhat of a hopeless romantic...that one phrase says it all! I love it!...and I give you major props for honing down Jou's inner monologue down to a tee! I definitely felt like I was in Jou's mind! Great job! ^-^
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh sooo cutee
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that is so wunderful!!! (I´m sorry.. I live in Germany and havn´t got so many words to discribe how much I enjoyed your story..) I loved Jous thoughts about Seto. And of curse Setos "You´re in my spot!" Awwww.. that´s so cute! You know, usualy I just read english to lern for school but sometimes the storys are so good... Thanks for this! Hope to read more of those storys soon!
Byebye Alani
Byebye Alani