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Normally i hate fics where everyone kills everyone else etc etc but this was well written and different. Congrats on an excellent job and i'd sure like to read a sequal!

nice...!

u r one sadistic writer...=)

Hot lemon. Nice fic so far! It's sad to think its comein to an end. Anyways cant wait for more!!

~IceAngel~

I like how you handled Ryou in this chapter. I can see Ryou wanting to protect family and be willing to take another life for that reason! I also liked the little comment about Malik tainting Mokuba's mind and Ryou getting yelled at- nice touch! It gives Ryou even more reason to deal with Marik since he's now part of Seto's family too!


Thanks!

*lower lip trembles* M-m-maaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiik! NOOOOooooooooooooooooo!! Why do my guys always die!

*sniffs* Not only that but they always end up smooshed. Bakura gets crushed by a car, Marik by trying to fly thanks to my kid! *glares at Ryou*

But since this is such an awesomly cool fic, 'n because you tortured your child's soul and mind I"ll let ya get away with killing yet another one of my hotties! But you better not kill anymore of my kids...>_> Waaaaiiiiittttt...why did the innocent hafta die x_x. Well one innocent, one sadistic but still.

Oh well great job! I lvoed it a lot!!

~IceAngel~

And what an interesting world it's turning out to be! I really liked the lemons this capter- nice! (and three too!) Thanks for continuing this story!

-Dragonwrangler

Heya there! OMG! Let me just say this~ AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So wonderful! I really really loved this. This has become a wonderful idea and is becoming a great series. Though I must wonder what is in the water in Domino to make everyone wanna kill everyone else. I mean yikes- I'm not plannin any trips over there for a while- I kinda don't wanna die too young. ^_~ Keep up the awesome work!!!

~IceAngel~

Ooo.. you're evil! You just suck your readers in and don't let go! I liked the way each chapter linked together but also could stand alone. And the circular way each chapter ran was good, I just had to find out what each character was reacting to! Thanks.

OMG! Our lil prim 'n proper 'n polite Ryou has finally snapped. Oh 'n the way Bakura was talkin to Ryou reminded me of the lemon of the two I had started but never finished so I guess I'll to that this weekend. Awesome how he smacked bakura like that.

O.O

Wait what the heck am I saying?! *runs to Bakura smushed body* ;.; *cries* He's dead. My guy is dead. Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *smirks widely* But OMG he has a hot body after death.

Anyways awesome job! I love it! Keep up the awesome work!!

~IceAngel~

this story is great.