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for Sins of the Flesh

by NihilEtNemo

person Sekhma_Bakura
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should be wondering what I'm doing here. I should be asking myself why I'm reading an MPREG, something I would absolutely NEVER touch, especially when it's quite possibly going to ruin the diginity of one, probably two, of my favorite characters. I should probably be wondering why I'm not turning the heck away and leaving this fic to the dust.

And strangely, I'm not. Congrats - but rest assured this will probably be the only MPREG I ever read. You're a writer with talent and your stories are spectacular. And so is your yaoi, by the way.

This is all actually much more well-written than I would expect of most MPREG fics, which are usually just an entirely self-centered Mary-Suefest. (Or maybe that's only when Yugi gets pregnant by Yami?) This is mushy, sure, which is something I NEVER expected of Bakura, (hehehe *pokes the secretly sensitive thief*) but tastefully written and remarkably sweet. Even though it's obvious both of them had habits of being assholes. XD

Something feels like it's missing at the end of that last chapter. You're not telling us that's going to be "The End," are you?
person clumsykitty
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh!!! Mexico... ¡That's my country!
What beach do you prefer?
Cancun
Xel-Ha
Acapulco
Cozumel

uhm?
I'll pleased to see the dragon in my land n.n
person BA
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tackle hugs* YAY! They're gonna (eventually) get married! squee! And poor Kurarin, having to get a job XD *is still rolling on the floor laughing at that one*
person TearsofTwilight
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! Finally, they're getting married! (smiles and dances drunkenly). I still can't wait to see what happens next.

TOT
person DemonicStreak
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* That waz so sweet........... If i had gotten diamonds like that i would have married the person on the spot (not really) but i guess Kaiba's the hard to please
person velvetina
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! Awww bless seto, hell when Bakura acts like that I kinda wish I was in Seto's situatio...and then I remember what happened to Seto an change my mind lol. Still Bakura is adorable in his own screwball kinda way. Update soon please
person DemonicStreak
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* the chapters were long but worth it....... any way the story wasnt all so creepy so be kind to the world and post the other chapters
person TOT
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Magnificant! It's both serious, sad, funny, and sweet! I love your stories!

TOT
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bakura is funny and needs to be hit over the head with something really heavy
person Silver Crescent X or Kimichue
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anyone who writes a Seto uke is a great friend of mine...LOL @_@