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for Sins of the Flesh

by NihilEtNemo

person ayachan
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg >oo< this is soooo cute... but people need to quit going for his stomach- he's got a baby for heaven's sake -_-.. can't wait for the next chapter! i want to see what else the hormone-induced seto will do :P
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really adored this chapter. I really don't think you made Seto or Bakura that out of character really. I mean, the point of fanfiction is to put them in scenes that they wouldn't normally be in, right? Mostly scenes that would CHANGE their character in some ways. And that makes sense, when a bit of seeming OOC-ness happens at the end of the chapter.

I really adored the scene with Bakura at the dress shop. It was absolutely brillant. I about died laughing when I read it. Just the whole thing was so funny. ^_^

I felt badly for Seto thoughout the whole thing, of course, but especially when he really just wants to be a girl, that's so unfair that it was taken from him, and VERY astute of Bakura to know just what he needs. I can't explain it, but the consensual scenes with him being so sweet were really...uh...sweet. ^_^ I really enjoyed them a lot, though I did feel sorry for Seto in the last one as well.

Poor Bakura is really trying. And I'm really hoping it all works for them. Poor Seto's just scared of being hurt again. Emotionally.

Update again soon! ^_^
person ayachan
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BAKURA YOU FREAK! QUIT SCREWING UP!!!! argh!!! poor seto ;_; i absolutely looooove this story.. very cute and funny at times... well, close to the beginning and middle o_O
person Ano
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for mentioning me. i can't wait for the next update. but i will.
person TOT
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about a change in atmosphere. This fic went from slightly humorous to just plain sad in the course of a single chapter. It creates a powerful impression, and I'm not sure many authors could pull it off. You do marvelously well though. I can't help but love this strange pairing more and more.

TOT
person LibraryKat
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue.
person jk
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I likeys!
person anna
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome, please continue soon.
person Ano
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! I hope you update again soon.
person War-chan
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He's FINALLY said YES!!!!!!! And yes, it's true all girls at some point in their life dream up their fav. idea for their wedding day(guilty! ^-^U), but Seto, being the bitch that he is makes poor Bakura "WORK" *oh! the horror of it all!* for the wedding ring! Meanie...! (o'corse I like my Seto bitchy-makes him SO much more interesting!) So all that's left to say is PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story........I check up on it EVERY day! Praying that it has updated!

~Miss War-chan ^_~