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OMG i loooooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee this story. u must continue. by the way i've pretty much read all of your yu-gi-oh stories already and i wanted to let u know that ur an awesome writer. keep going. -yay for seto lemons- Jess

I really love this story. I don't care if they're ooc; you make it work very well. Anyway, fanfiction isn't about imitating Takehashi Kasuki (sp?); it's about bringing to life characters that you love, and that involves them growing in ways you may never have imagined. That's what makes them seem so alive; the characters write the story, and not the other way around. ^^

WHAT THE SHIT IS THIS!?! KAIBA A GIRL!! Get real!! I say redo it and shit but this is a terrible Fanfic I ever read and I read some bad ones. This takes the cake.

Absolutly love the dress... So pretty... Seto reminds me of a barbie doll in it.. is so cute! ^_^ IM going to make a doll of that now, with bakura as the groom.....

l really enjoy your story. I hope you update very soon, ^.^

Yay! She updated! Woo Hooo!

But anyways i like the OOC Kaiba. It seems that it would fit him perfectly. Thanks for the mentions and i hope you update soon.

And don't worry i'll be patient this time. Can't rush the magic.

Wonderful! Hilarious!
I don't know what to think... I only wish if one day Seto couldn't take away aal the bad memories and for the good stop acting like a... well... you know.
Keep writing!

This story is so good and it just keeps getting better. I want to read more!!!!!!!!! Update soon.

You updated!!! I love you! I offer much pie in gratitude.

You're right when you say that Seto would never wear a dress. Then again you're also right when you say that just about everyone would like to see him in one! I'm glad you don't worry too much about OOCness. After all, one of the major advantages of fanfiction is that you can take a character and make them something even more. I try not to think of it as reworking their personality but adding more depth to it. Anyway, this was a very well done chapter. I like how both Seto and Bakura are struggling with their emotions. It was so sweet (bitterly sweet mind you) when at the end of the chapter Bakura felt guilty for thinking of Seto in ways that wouldn't have bothered him before. It was amazingly touching.

TOT