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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have always wanted to see a fiction writer say something like this--"Why would I want to read stories about stupid characters that never act realistic in situations that could never happen where everything always falls perfectly into place and everything always turns out Happily Ever After"--
Wow! This is great so far! Love the responses to the reviewers and in the writing you have shown a fantastic capacity for observing the *real* progress of human courtship...great fun!! I am thoroughly looking forward to the next chapter! *GRIN*
Wow! This is great so far! Love the responses to the reviewers and in the writing you have shown a fantastic capacity for observing the *real* progress of human courtship...great fun!! I am thoroughly looking forward to the next chapter! *GRIN*
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK...I have to say that you really have nailed the reality of relationships between a person who has come out of abuse and a person who has a rough nature but genuinely is in love with the other person. I don't feel that it is a bad HP/DM ripoff at all! Of course there are some parallels, HP being from an abusive background and DM being a potential perp, but hey...isn't that the nature of fictional characters?
Keep writing! It really is good!
J.
Keep writing! It really is good!
J.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was such a cool story.keep it up
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grate Fucking Chapter I Just can't get enough of this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT Been way to LONG SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and keep on writing
IT Been way to LONG SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and keep on writing
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I followed you here from FF.net. Just thought I'd let you know that the story is kick ass! And no it doesn't seem like a bad Harry Potter fanfic. :D
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor seto! If he's afraid of doctors who's going to deliver the baby? I'm sorry but I could so see Bakura passing out seeing the baby being born. He might act tough but I've seen grown men over 6' hit the floor. Actually I find that a little funny. Anyway Please Update!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter. I actually like the way Bakura is going about this. But Seto DOES have reason to worry(even though Baku says he won't harm him. He does have his principles.)
Anyhowm Update soon. I've never read a Harry Potter fic, but if it's anything like you described, I should start, huh?
Loved the chapter!
-Niiro
Anyhowm Update soon. I've never read a Harry Potter fic, but if it's anything like you described, I should start, huh?
Loved the chapter!
-Niiro
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that you updated again so soon please keep the updates coming can't what to read the next chapter hope its as good as this last one.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATEY PLEASIES
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh great chapter again, like always ^^