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for Sins of the Flesh

by NihilEtNemo

person prince of dark
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cried. I love it. email me when you update plze?
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An odd pair..But to have their story told by you= MASTERPIECE! I am officially HOOKED! The writing is just so...real. It's like you're not writing, you're documenting. Such a fluid style. And the emotions. So believeable. WONDERFUL! You do an excellent job at getting their emotions across. SOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD! More plz! Take your time. Such genius cannot be rushed ^_^
person kisa
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is getting really complecated and that's why it feels so real to read it........just when I thought seto will actully give in bakura has to fuck it all up and go back to day 1......thank you for updating so fast...can't waite to read more my gusses are not as good as your imagination......
person Dragon7
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters in one week I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D Mokuba is So Scary meen it so kawaii AKA ( Cute)!!!!!!!!LOL Poor Bakura and Seto I hope things get better for them. Keep up the good work and Update soon. :)
person Dragon7
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. You don't know how happy you made me I've been waiting Six months for this chapter and to see that you updated "Sins of the Flesh" it just made my day. Trust me this chapter did not disappoint it was fucking great you still got it. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. I hope that it does not take so long to post the next one.
person kisa
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh..god I can't belive you finally updated this story..plz update as fast as you can .......I love this story it's my favorite story....and this new chapter was just perfect..........some how I feel seto is not giving up...but at the same time he is in love too....you show his confusion perfectly plz plz don't leave me hanging again.....
person Lucky Thirteen
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Write more!! Plllleeeeaaaaassssseeeeee!
person Lucky Thirteen
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I quite like it, especially the fact that neither of them seem very out of character.
person anon
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Simple love it. Read all 14 chaps in one sitting and i'm waiting for you to continue. Come on chop chop. I'm dying to know what happens. I love Bakura, the way he tries so hard to make Seto happy, yet Seto is completely oblivious that Bakura may actually care about him. Nice mood swings from Seto as well, it's tough dealing with someone who's pregnant- man or woman
person kisa
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really wished you whould complete this one..........I never loved any fic this much,.,,,I asked you once before to do so..........I've already read it more than 30 times(I really did) and I loved it ,,,,,,,,,,,,just loved it .please continue.......just tell me what it takes for you to end this .please do....it's just on my mind and it wont go away...........please.....