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for Sins of the Flesh

by NihilEtNemo

schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I'm still shocked (1st section).... however being one of ur big fans, I still wanna give da story a try.
I'll post again after I have done with da whole thing. keep up da good work =)
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm on chapter 5, I can't wait till finish da whole story to submit a review.
I love this story so far. I especially love da part dat bakura proposed lol he's so cute.
I'm praying dat they work things out... bakura needed to take very good care of seto.. poor seto...
person Master Jeannie
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY HAS ME THINKING OF SETO ALOT LATELY. I WRITE MY OWN FICTION AND LATELY HE HAS BEEN MY MUSE. I LOVE HIM. PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORY. NORMALLY I DON'T READ THINGS LIKE THIS BUT YOU GOT ME HOOKED. THANK YOU. I GET CAUGHT UP IN THE STORY AND I FEEL LIKE IM THE ONE WANTING SETO TO LOVE ME AND THAT IM PROTECTING HIM FROM THE PRESS AND HIS IDIOT CLASSMATES. WHAT DOES THAT BITCH ANZU WANT TO TALK TO HIM ABOUT? I ALREADY WANT TO RIP HER THROAT OUT. SHE IS SO NOSY. SHE CANT STAND TO BE LEFT OUT IN ANYTHING. IM ANXIUOS TO READ MORE CHAPTERS. I HAVE THIS STORED IN "MY FAVORITES" SO I CAN KEEP WATCH FOR NEW CHAPTERS. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SINS OF THE FLESH.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see more of this story as it's quite compelling. Thanks for sharing!

'Ko
person ayachan
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was sweet. At least they are sem-making progress.. for now! Lol, they are just so back and forth all the time. Anyway, I actually want to hear waht Anzu is going to say! Well, that and see Bakura rip Jou a new one. Jou's my favorite character, but he's being such an ass in this story that I don't have much sympathy for him >_<
person Dragon7
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better this chapter ROCKS. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and update soon.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I literally felt elation at the sight of the new chapter. I look forward to this story with the burning intensity of 700 million suns! Love ya ^_^
person maggiemay
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I just read this all in one setting. I believe I started it before and wandered away. I enjoy your characterization and the story development. You are a great writer. thank you for sharing your talent and your creativity.

I do have problems that will stop me from finishing your story as good as it is. I just don't believe a rape victim would ever willingly trust his rapist EVER...certainly not enough to walk with them or MARRY them.

Kaiba is a complete alpha...IF he was ever overpowered and raped by Bakura I honestly believe he would arrange for Bakura to die a horrible death. A baby? Great concept...like the logistics of it...but I don't see Kaiba keeping it, especially if it's a product of rape from a known psycho. *shudders at the genetic possibilities of Kaiba and Bakura* Also, there is the fact that Bakura would always know he BESTED Kaiba in the most intimate way possible. Seto would know that and his pride would suffer daily from that. It would drive him to mayhem...or maiming Bakura, which...come to think of it, is NOT a bad idea. The bastard is a RAPIST.

I applaud your talent and imagination, and your skill is fantastic. But those parts get to me. keep up the good work and I will look for more of your wonderful stories.

Maggiemay
person Dragon7
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you did on http://setosgirl0.deviantart.com/ its really great. I can't wait to read more so update soon.
person kisa
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.your speeding up....this last chapter really showed how complicated bakura is.It felt like he was tryin to fight himself.....thanks again for updatin fast.......even if you dont update in months it worth to wait