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for Sins of the Flesh

by NihilEtNemo

person Yayoi_sama
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! I like your fic a lot, It's not really weird at all. I'm so confused though so please update soon! Ryou is the man!
person zehlyah
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It took real guts to put this story out. I'm glad you did. What a concept!! Please, do continue. I can't wait to read more :-)
person TearsofTwilight
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Very good. Definately weird, but very good. Every one of your stories is worth reading, and nothing is cliche. That and they maintain enjoyment the second time in reading. You're both a talented and imaginative writer.

-TOT
person TT
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! XX GAH! Poor Seto and he was pregnant before?! O.o What happend?.. ._. I have a small theary, but I hope I'm wrong..

Well anyways I liked this chapter and I'm happy that Ryou punched him! However he deserves allot more like for example...having a very important part of his cut off and fed to the dogs ><#

Well I really do hope this has happy ending or somethign similar at one point! X3 Keep writing and thanks for updating and not leaving us hanging!
person TT *sighs*
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......... x.x Okay I hate the review thingy... umm as I tried to say before ! Thanks for update so soon and I hope to read more. And ignore the second review, but count the first one and this one as a single one ^^; sorry!
person TearsofTwilight
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's not too terribly weird so far. I vote yes on this fic. It's going to turn out really unique, and we all need something outside the norm once in a while. As usual, great writing and description.

TOT
person DreamPrincess
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too lazy to log in...This was a good story...I enjoyed it...
person ANGEL
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it, why is Seto refered to as a girl in the beginning.
You state that he is a guy and the rest of the story (chap. 1), he is a guy.
So why is he refered as a girl please explain that to me.

By the way update soon, I got hooked except for that girl thing
person War-chan
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please say that this IS NOT a one-shot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's WAY too good to be JUST a one-shot!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I always like good uke!Seto stories *sighs happily*.........

Ja ne
AllLoveForUke!Seto!!!
Miss War-chan ^_~
person War-chan
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm a little confused....in your AN you said/typed that Seto really IS a guy in this, and then Seto's dying mother says that Seto is her strong little GIRL!? Is this like, 'I'm dying and so are my brain cells.' or is Seto REALLY a girl!? Is Seto a innter sex maybe (I rather like that idea! Hehe..) Please e-mail me and give me some insite on this, or a lest when you Update give some info. to everyone! Hell, I CAN'T be the only one confused about this! But over all this is a really good fic.
(And off topic: When are you going to update your Harry Potter 'Old Habbit's Die Hard' story!?!?! I SO want to know what happens to Snape!)

Ja!
(yes I know I've reviewed already but I went and re-read the story----and I losted myself ^.^U )