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Forgot to add this XX my bad: Oh I like the fact that Bakura is going to try and convince Seto to merry him! I can't wait to see what he does to make Seto love him. :3 ~day dreams~ *A mental image of a mini group consisting of Jou, Honda, and Anzu dressed as witches in a corner cowering in fear, while Bakura, who is holding a teary eyed Seto,atempts to stab the mini group with a large pointed sword. And in the background you can see Yugi, Ryou and Yami (who looks ready to kill someone) are throwing confetti everywhere.* .....did I mention that Seto is in a white dress? XD heh.. Well glad to see you update so soon! X3 good day and again I sitll have to go with Denney's ^^"

Yes frustration counts allot! Frustration is a nice way to suffer X.x I should know being frustrated is something that ahppens to me on a dayli bases! XD About time it happens to someone else, even if it is just in a fic. Hmm? Well maybe It's nice nowing the paring before you read something, but I had a hunch it was going to be BakuraxSeto especially in the third chapter, were he (Bakura) looked like he was alredy having a bit of a change of heart after Seto told him his storie! ^_^ Oh and good point since he was a she then became a he his a he so I'll refer to him as a 'he'.. since he is one now ^^ *Sighs* I now have a reason to dislike mostly everyone >< Bakura for raping, Ryou for telling Yugi, Yugi for telling Jou, Jou for , Hitting poor Seto, Not leaving him alone, Being a jerk and telling Honda who I also now dislike for also being a jerk. Actully the only person I don't dislike at the moment is Seto because he hasn't done anything wrong! ^^; Oh and Bakura punching Jou was a nice thing to write! =D I like bakura more now, I still dislike him abit though, but not as much! He defended Seto and punched that jerk of a Jou! albatross? o.o The bird.. umm a pasword..?

OPUS: A WISH FOR WINGS THAT WORK!!!!! I remember watching that cartoon around Christmas!

Anways....another good chapter(I'm pretty repetitive, sorry). It was like gradeschool all over again. One person knows, then everyone does. It was both funny and kind of pathetic. Excellent job. I can't wait to see where this fic is heading.

-TOT

oh my, this is getting terribly complicated. hope this works out fine. kinda irked about bakura being the father (sorry, still rooting for Jou/Seto) >.
hehe

this is the most interesting Mpreg fic yet.

does mokuba know anything about this or is he also kept in the dark? man, he's gonna be an uncle!

take care. write more!

Oh my god I loved it!!!
The Drama in this story is so intense.
You have to update this soon!
I soooooo need to know what happens.

Ok, First Bakura is an ass. And insane. But you already knew that. Second, I'm not sure why it was recommended that I read this. I was told it was good. And I must admit it is well written, but is freakishly twisted insane. Any wayz, I think I'll keep reading this out of pure curiosity, since I don't normally read yugioh. This is a strange review. What I'm trying to say, is that its good, I just think its a little weird. I mean the whole He was a Girl, but now He's a Guy who can Get Pregnant...@.@ Umm...shutting up now. Good Job! *^^* (-.-;)

Alright then! I'm still struggling with the bloody review thingy though xx I hope it works this time :3 And yes I know it can't be chopped off, but I can dream can't I? Oh well just as long as he also suffers a bit I'm happy, Wait... is he going to suffer a bit too? X3 or is it just Seto who’s going to go trough more misery? >.< Poor him... (Wait it’s ‘her’ now huh? hmm I’ll just keep calling him he it’s less confusing for me XD), but Seto torment is fun. Well I liked this chapter and my first theory was correct! It was his step father although I didn't think he couldn't have an abortion now I feel sorrier for him! I hope everything works out. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work.

So he'd die if he had an abortion, but he miscarried just fine a few years ago? Dayafter pills come to mind, but I suppose Seto hadn't thought of that at the time, even though he knew he could get pregnant. Did he mail the pregnancy test to Bakura? I also wonder why KaibaCorp security wouldn't have been trained to arrive at Kaiba's office in .02 seconds. Somehow, I would have found magic to be more realistic than transgender surgery with hormone therapy while still being able to become pregnant. The hormone therapy would have messed with the ovulation cycle too much. Now I wonder if during his time of the month, Kaiba sticks a tampon up his ass. It's a funny image.

Heehee. Anyways, I hope you continue writing this. I want to see what all you end up doing with the characters. I would hope that at least Mokuba knows he was once a girl. I'm having fun imagining all the private girly things Seto might do like lacey underwear, long salty baths, romance movies on the weekends (possibly with Mokuba as family time). That was a nice touch with the paperweight rose.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Poor seto. ;_;

Talk about an emotional chapter. Poor Seto. Those bits about what Gozaburo did to him were horribly sad. Anyway great chapter (you deserve the praise!). Can't wait for an update.

-TOT