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Why continue to post stories if you are going to leave them unfinished? I believe I speak for all readers of your work when I say this respectfully: YOU SUCK.

Please tell me you're going to finish this soon, I'm begging you, PLEASE! My eyes (somehow) skipped over the part of the description that said "In Progress" so I ended up reading it, and I Love It beyond belief, I've only read two MPREG fics before, the first one I read was...... yeah, but yours is amazing, renewed my opinion of mpreg, and I love it even though once in a while the characters do something a bit out of character (though that's what I expect from fanfiction, cause different stories have different planes of existence and therefore affect characters differently, blah blah blah but <--ignore this im blabbling) and I cannot tell you how much I love this fic for so many different reasons, I've pretty much been going through all your yugioh stories here and this is one of my favorites (out of your stories and all the fanfics I've read). So please continue it! Even though apparently you haven't touched it since 2007.... Do long reviews bother you? I'm sorry if they do but I'm on my knees in front of my laptop begging, so please finish it well! *big teary eyes that will disappear if they bother you* Thank you!

Love the story, absolutely amazing. Please update soon! - SM

It looks like you've put this on permenant hiatus. Too bad, I've been reading it for the past few days and really, really enjoying it.

Honestly, I HATE every MPreg fic I've ever seen, but this... this is different. The whole concept is very well put together, believable, even. This is my first time reading this pairing, and honestly, I'm afraid to see it done by another author. The way you portray these two and their interaction is amazing, flawless even.

If you ever do continue on with this story, and give these two an ending, I'll be sure to witness it. You've tortured the crap outta poor Seto (kudos) and the romantic in the deep, deep recesses of my soul wants to see him get a happy ending.

Thanks for the awesome read, while it lasted.

Mahalo,
KC.

What is this! I've read this store like three times and I haven't reviewed yet? What's wrong with me!

I heart your story very much, and I would love to see how Bakura and Kaiba's relationship develops. Like, for instance, will Kaiba ever accept the fact that he actually likes Bakura?

Assigning animals to the characters was very funny. Mokuba=wallaby? I never would have thought of that myself... *looks pensive*

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Cute. I like how Bakura can be half unperspective of things. ^_^ I also love that Seto lo-ves him. Not entirely all together yet, but getting there. Oh, I hope Yami Bakura proposes beautfiully! Silly him! Proposing in a bathroom stall. <3

Also, I agree with a comment made before me. Don't let Bakura off the hook. Keep the kid. It'd be a different sort of ending and Kaiba wanted to keep it, no?

Hope to read more soon!

Yes! Antago sex!!! XD Sorry, luckily for you I'm a rather twisted reviewer- and a fan of antagoshipping myself. I don't see why you called Kaiba a girl if you made it clear he was a boy... That was weird. And your fight scene was a little unclear. Half the time I wasn't sure who was doing what, but I was right in assuming that Yami Bakura would win.

Good job though over all. I wish Yami Bakura and Ryou weren't dating though. It would be nice if Yami Bakura would just fall for Kaiba at some point. Now off to the next chapter and then my own story. ^_~

I love Ryou's reaction. It's quite believable honestly. I was almost quite happy there though that the two would break up. ^_^ Chance for Kaiba and Yami Bakura. It is possible for Yami Bakura to be a good guy and I think it's possible for the two to end up together. Off to chapter three- I'm so distracted from my writing right now. One more and then I'll be good and go write myself.

I really do hope those two end up together. <3 I feel so bad for Kaiba and I wished Yami bakura would actually comfort him. Maybe he will. ^_^ We'll see. But I do have a story to write.

wow after finishin all 18 chapters, I'm completely wordless. this fiction is simply great! I love it! somehow I still wish Bakura could have killed Jou, Honda and Anzu though. I loathe wat they did to seto, I really do!

I really love this fiction. Bakura is stunnin, amazing n.. I'm out of words... I love this Bakura. despite of wat he had done to seto, he was so sweet, caring and real. I'm as happy as him when I saw progress between he n seto. please don't stop writing. I have to see them living together happy ever after *grin*