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by bluesun

person Vocanova
schedule July 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. I would love to find out what twists and turns this story will take next. Please update soon.
person Winter-Moon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great idea for a story-can't wait to see where it goes next! Update soon please!!
person Pat
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy to read this story. I can't wait for more. Please update soon. Ja
person arrow_armstrong
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the new chapter. cant wait for the next.
person Arainaina
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very good please update soon I really like so Yugi and Yami finally got together but why was tristan there besides there to check on solomon?? Was he going to take Yugi or something?
person Shark Crush
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when is Yami going to take Yugi?
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you mean Yugi's friend Tea when you ask if you are spelling her name right, then it is T-E-A not T-E-I-A. You seriously have got to work on your spelling and punctuation - especially punctuation!! There are parts of this that are damned hard to understand because they are so badly written. Fantastic story idea - horrid sentence structure.
Koneko
person frogger666
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so much. So please hurry up and continue it. Please say it's continuing. This is my most favorite Yu-Gi-Gi fanfict yet. (No offense to other fanficts)
person Arainaina
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh good chapter again thanks for posting chapter 7 for us.... Now I'm no longer confused.... anyway great chapter and hope you update again soon
person Amy
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Chapter 7 turned up! ^_^